artificialsweetener
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 05, 2005
Location: indiana
Posts: 40
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| Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 4:35 pm |
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so theres a few too many typical emo cliches, at least in my opinion...but i like certain lines...what do you guys think??
I don’t think you fully understand
That I’d pull the trigger if the gun was in my hand
I bet it makes you feel real good
The way I hang off your every word
But you shouldn’t be flattered, you see
Cuz you’re just bad news and me?
Well I’m addicted to tragedies
And you play off all my addictions
And all of my insecurities
You learned right from the start
How to break me down
You’re a pro at it now
Aren’t you proud?
I remember standing with you in the rain
I remember how you kept me warm
Now you make me feel like its snowing in my bed and I’m alone
Then again, I’ve always been strangely attracted to storms
The changing colors of your hair show what
It took me so long to see
Red for the fire, blue for the coldness
Opposing emotions
Like your split personality
Then it all just bled to black
Just like everything we had
And all the trust within me
That I’ll never have back
Until I can get some closure
Until this can just be over
But no never really meant no to you
And I never really learned to live without you
You’re something that I’ve kept in mind
That feeling I try so hard to deny
False hopes that broke
You cut the rope
When I found out about her
I said I’d never forgive you but
I sure would like to forget you. |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 12:44 am |
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Hmm... What do we think...? I don't know. But speaking just for me, I think this one is great, just as the other three that I read by you, were. Good... -very good job. Cheers!
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