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hereafter
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Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 9:45 pm |
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Ok this one is a little week without hearing it with music. its just a sappy love song, its acoustic so as soon as i finish the music for it ill post the chords.
Spot lights and moon shine
Under the bridge tonight
We drink to love
And all thats to come
(Chorus)
Take me to heaven
With those angel eyes
As we stand on street corners
Under bus stops and red lights
And as we kiss
Im jealous of the butterflies
Sky scrappers and holding hands
Kiss the sky
As we share this last dance
Before we become just another headlight
Taking the long way home
Deeper into the night
She'll never know its her I'll miss
And these goodbyes are leaving me numb
As I stand on street corners
Under bus stops and red lights
And when she leaves
Im jealous of the goodbyes |
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Cerebellus
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Joined: Aug 04, 2005
Posts: 12
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| Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 1:36 am |
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"As I stand on street corners
Under bus stops and red lights"
Big fan of this part, as it lends the song a certain contrast between
the emotion and the imagery at first, then brings them together towards
the end when one would realize this isn't really a "happy" love song. |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 6:00 am |
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-Very nice! I don't quite know how to explain it, but when I read the line that says, "I'm jealous of the butterflies," I kind of felt some strange feeling of amazement. I wasn't surprised that you were able to write that, or anything. I'm struggling to word what I'm trying to say, in any way that makes sense. I think the whole song is great. -Interesting, attention-grabbing, creative. It's just really cool. -Not much else left to say. Cheers, hereafter!
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hereafter
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Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:50 am |
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hey thanks guys, i just recorded the music for this. its bad quality and my 1st attempt, i just made it up on the spot so its kind of sketchy. if you wanna hear it though ill email it to you, just let me no. |
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