RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 6:13 am |
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-Just my opinion, but this one seems like it could use some improvement. This is just criticism, and also, I have no idea what this is supposed to sound like, so that makes it harder to judge it's quality. I think you are a pretty good writer though, so don't take this the wrong way. It just looks a little more rough than some of your other songs. Cheers, man!
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