"Dreaming of Music"

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:00 pm

Hey, hi, hello,

Anyone who is passionate about music to a very strong level should definitely let me know their thoughts/criticisms/or stories, for this one. It's called, "Dreaming of Music". I'm thinking there's no needed explanation about the meaning. Read it, enjoy it, and always love music.

"Dreaming of Music" (written on 5/16/05)

Bright lights,
soul flights.
-The sound elevation.
Music alive,
good nights,
when the vibe levitates you.
It's what makes life.
-Feelin' so right,
lost in elation.
The highlight
of a good time,
when the melodies drape you.

(Pre-Chor.):
It's so warm,
an energy that blankets you.
How I crave
to be wrapped up inside that emotional high.

I'm...-

(Chorus):
Dreaming... of music.
The love that burns within was realized
when I fell asleep,
woke again, and found that I was still
dreaming of music.
Flowing rythms, captivate my heart.

(Short Interlude goes here; ideas in mind)

(Bridge):
It is kind of hard,
to explain just what I feel,
but the sound of instruments
and vocalizations combined,
always fulfill.
It's the happiness that nothing else can provide.
Nothing else touches me so deep inside.
So I will always, be...-

Dreaming of music...
Dreaming of music...

(Chorus)

And I never want that sound to fade away...!

(Outro):
Bright lights,
soul flights...

Music alive,
good nights.

What makes life
so right. -Feelin' so right.

(abrupt increase in the intensity, and a change in the sound, of the music, with minor vocalizations)

The highlight...
of a good time,
When music...
is in the, air.....

EnD

That was the song, and this is my dream. I am determined to do this, and there are abundant ideas for if that remote possibility does play out in the end. Wish me luck!

Cheers and a smile, All!

RiCterMan

ubw newbie Joined: Aug 04, 2005 Posts: 12

Excellent work. Kind of a "less is more"-type thing, where the phrases you use carry more emotion because of their brevity. I was pleased by it.

Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2005 7:16 am

Thank you for the comment, and for seeing my goal with this! If you post any lyrics, or have posted any already, I'll check them out probably overnight tonight. I reply to as much as I can on here, and new lyrics/poetry always interest me. Cheers, You!

RiCterMan

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 3:36 pm

i really like this!! its cheerful and beautiful and it just makes me smile...music is a wonderful thing, but when people try to actually write songs about it, they're usually kind of corny...this, on the other hand, is very good. Very Happy

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 10:54 pm

Thank you much. My idea for this one, is a collaborative effort with my cousin. He and I both share the connection of a passion for music. Of course' it seems like if either or both of us are successful, he'll be the first to get there. His band is very talented, and honestly he always seems to astound me with his guitar skills. I, on the other hand, am still in need of a band (I'm lacking a PA, etc.). For now, I have ideas that sound cool in my mind, when I put them on a guitar tab prgogram, but that's the only music I have around my singing and lyrics, that I can hear outside of my head.

Ya know? -I'm never good with ending these posts. -Don't know why, but I gotta' go. Cheers!

RiCterMan

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