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northernlibra
ubw newbie
Joined: Jul 25, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 12:45 pm |
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the world is on your screen (mama and papa)
i was borned in the early eighties
long time before cartoons went japanese
my friends wore in the streets while us
parents watched the news
it was in the eighties
we came 'n set time off
it was in the early days
of the mighty days of haze-chase
so we came to the nineties
our brain was now set-up for a wash
it started in first grade
the teacher told us the course
don't smoke weed
don't do this
if you don't you'll just speak peace
i was told to
listen to my teacher
my parents told me so
the world is on your screen
mama
papa
the world is on your screen
binna bokoj bang bang oh jah told me so
now we're all in the 2000's
still
i watch news and they all
kill
kill
kill
the streets are empty
my friends are gone
they all watch news
while popping all those
pills
pills
pills
now we're all in the 2000's
still
i watch news and they all
kill
kill
kill
still...
never listen to your teacher
you're your own
the world is on your screen
mama
papa
the world is on your screen
oh jah told me so
told me so
told me so
don't hold me now... |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 5:11 pm |
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Hey Libra,
I see this is your first post. Welcome to UBW!
What you have written is quite interesting. I like the way you used a "timeline structure" while writing it. It gives it a nice touch. If you want, check out some of what I've written, and let me know what you think. I'd like to know your opinion. Lastly, post more lyrics, if you've got them. Cheers, and good job!
RiCterMan (or call me Rick) |
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northernlibra
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Joined: Jul 25, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 8:38 pm |
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Hi, Rick!
Thanks for your comment. More lyrics are coming (more or less structured).
northernlibra |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 10:21 pm |
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Cool. I'll check them out as they're posted. If you want, check out some of mine, and let me know what you think. Cheers!
RiCterMan |
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