hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 9:47 pm |
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I just moved out to Toronto and I couldnt write shit for about a week, wich sucks because I was starting to write an album with around 6 songs, i might change that to 5 though, we'll see how it goes. anyway my girlfriend came down to visit me and when she left all sorts of stuff came to me. The albums gonna be called "65 miles from love" theres a story behind that. all teh songs are gonna fit into kind of a story type thing. if you seem to like the first one I'll post more as there done.
anyway here it is.
"Collide with destiny"
Remember the things you said to me
as we laid on your bedroom floor
fighting over who loves who more
singing to our song
And I'll sing along with you until the end
until the words lose all meaning
and the meaning loses all words
But when I look into those eyes
I'll save every moment
because your my only one
-Chorus-
Afraid your just a dream
I've never been so scared
to open my eyes
afraid your just a dream
ive never been so scared
to say good bye
Your lips say everything
as they press against mine
and as we go down into this night
I'll be Jack if you'll be my Rose
take my hand and remember
what you said to me
"I'll never let you go"
I'll never let go, If you never let go
I'll never let go, If you never let go
Never let me go |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 5:18 pm |
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Hey,
I liked most of that song. It was written very well, except I'm not sure about the whole "Titanic" theme towards the end (not meant to offend). But of course', I wouldn't know what may have inspired that, and also if you like how you wrote it, that is all that counts. Nice job, once again. Cheers!
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