minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3647
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| Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 12:53 pm |
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Very interesting lyrics!! I like lots of it, and I don't like some if.
I like the way you combine unlke things from verse to verse, that always gets me interested, for example:
| Quote: | i look small
am nearly as small as a volly ball
i broke my neck
just to try to prove am not an insect |
I think that's an interesting line.
I have a tough time with literal references sometimes when they seem out of context... For example:
| Quote: | people calling me a bodrick
you mpeople should suck my dick |
I just don't think that works there.
Anyways, thanks for sharing, YOU'VE been BUSY!!!!!
Hopefully I'll get caught up soon!!! |
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Bullet41
ubw rookie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
Posts: 120
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| Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:06 pm |
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read pt2 of insect its alot better and dont forget to read memorys from the past ,demolition lovers, tell that chris i know where he lives ,Brother and the king of darkness |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:33 pm |
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I have to say, Bullet..., This is really good, but in my opinion, it's not your best.
However, I dealt with this probably growing up, while in school. The morons I went to school with seemed to think I was a homosexual, because I'm more feminine than most guys. I'm not incredibly feminine, to the point where I act like a girl, or talk like some of them do. It basically pertains to how emotional I can get, and my sensitivity. I used to let all my emotions out, including the expression of caring feelings for my friends, girls and guys. So, I guess I can understand how it looked the way it did. I've also been very sensitive, as compared to most guys, for the majority of my lifespan (so far). I think the reason for how I unintentionally portrayed myself, is that I grew up with two younger sisters, and no older "role model-type" brother. I'm thinking it's possible that sometimes, when a young boy grows up in that kind of situation, the outcome can show through in their personality traits.
My point is, I got made fun of (and more) everyday, to the point where when I'd get home from school, I'd pretty much go to my room and cry. I could say more about this, but I don't care much about it anymore, because it's in the past.
Good Job, even though I've liked some of your past works more. This is still a job well done. Cheers, to you, and a quirky little thumbs up! (um, don't ask why...  )
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