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50pence
ubw newbie
Joined: Jun 03, 2005
Location: UK, England
Posts: 12
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| Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:49 am |
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Got an ex-boyfrind {ex-boyfriend}
who calls me late at night
all he wants to do {babababa} is blame me for his life
i date a stupid jerk who forgets my name
he goes out all night it drives me insane
Chorus
lucky me, its lucky me, always lucky ..
ok so i made this bit up, any one got any suggestions to add to the song ?  |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 9:07 pm |
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lol..
sounds like a cool punk rock song already... cool lyrics! |
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Bullet41
ubw rookie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
Posts: 120
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| Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 7:32 am |
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Your music is patheticly shit go back to song writing school please for the children.
Just joking its not bad its just u need to make it more exciting its a bit too simple and try to put more effort in your songs.
PS:Just joking about the top bit lol |
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