sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 4:51 pm |
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This is me, at my most massarchictic,
It's a shame to waste this night,
The streetlight shining through my window,
Finally burnt away my mind,
Let's take a picture,
Of this monster that your spite created,
And in the morning, You wont see me,
Because I will be a ghost,
The funniest things,
Always happen when you're ,
not in the mood,
And when you finally get there,
Something comes along,
to drag you back,
The strangest things,
Always happen when you,
Don't know what is happening,
Or who the people laughing are,
This is me, at my most vulnerable,
I don't want you to see me now,
You trap me up into a corner,
And I might just snap tonight,
Let's take a picture,
Of this monster that your spite created,
And in the morning, You're not breathing,
And I am long gone.
The funniest things,
Always happen when you're ,
not in the mood,
And when you finally get there,
Something comes along,
to drag you back,
The strangest things,
Always happen when you,
Don't know what is happening,
Or who the people laughing are,
In my head I'm in control,
Of all the demons hiding there,
In my head, I'm in control,
I wan't to do this,
The funniest things,
Always happen when you're ,
not in the mood,
And when you finally get there,
Something comes along,
to drag you back,
The strangest things,
Always happen when you,
Don't know what is happening,
Or who the people laughing are, |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 10:24 pm |
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Once again, very nice... It's intense, and I'm curious as to how you portray these emotions when you perform. With lyrics that are more dark, emotion is key to singing the words, and putting on an incredible show, at the same time. I saw Staind a few years ago, and I swear it was more depressing than it was fun. Aaron Lewis didn't show much emotion at all, and with the content of his songs, I expected to have a better concert experience than I ended up having.
Now, to read the other song you posted today. Cheers, Tom!
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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:43 am |
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well I will tell you that I'm older than 13, and thank you.
From what I read when I looked through your stuff, you write good for a 13 year old, and a hell of alot better than I did at your age  |
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