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sixtysecondminute
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 4:51 pm Reply with quote

This is me, at my most massarchictic,
It's a shame to waste this night,
The streetlight shining through my window,
Finally burnt away my mind,
Let's take a picture,
Of this monster that your spite created,
And in the morning, You wont see me,
Because I will be a ghost,

The funniest things,
Always happen when you're ,
not in the mood,
And when you finally get there,
Something comes along,
to drag you back,
The strangest things,
Always happen when you,
Don't know what is happening,
Or who the people laughing are,

This is me, at my most vulnerable,
I don't want you to see me now,
You trap me up into a corner,
And I might just snap tonight,
Let's take a picture,
Of this monster that your spite created,
And in the morning, You're not breathing,
And I am long gone.

The funniest things,
Always happen when you're ,
not in the mood,
And when you finally get there,
Something comes along,
to drag you back,
The strangest things,
Always happen when you,
Don't know what is happening,
Or who the people laughing are,

In my head I'm in control,
Of all the demons hiding there,
In my head, I'm in control,
I wan't to do this,

The funniest things,
Always happen when you're ,
not in the mood,
And when you finally get there,
Something comes along,
to drag you back,
The strangest things,
Always happen when you,
Don't know what is happening,
Or who the people laughing are,
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RiCterMan
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 10:24 pm Reply with quote

Once again, very nice... It's intense, and I'm curious as to how you portray these emotions when you perform. With lyrics that are more dark, emotion is key to singing the words, and putting on an incredible show, at the same time. I saw Staind a few years ago, and I swear it was more depressing than it was fun. Aaron Lewis didn't show much emotion at all, and with the content of his songs, I expected to have a better concert experience than I ended up having.

Now, to read the other song you posted today. Cheers, Tom!

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Bullet41
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 4:53 am Reply with quote

Dude how old are you
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sixtysecondminute
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:23 am Reply with quote

Bullet41 wrote:
Dude how old are you


Is age at all relevant in anything to do with lyrics? Or do my lyrics seem childish to you?
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Bullet41
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:30 am Reply with quote

No i dont thinK its childish i just thought the song is to good to be writen from someone my age.and am 13
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sixtysecondminute
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:43 am Reply with quote

well I will tell you that I'm older than 13, and thank you.

From what I read when I looked through your stuff, you write good for a 13 year old, and a hell of alot better than I did at your age Smile
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