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burger
ubw newbie


Joined: Jul 05, 2005
Location: Norwich, UK
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 2:20 pm |
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REMEMBER
I walk alone
Partners pass me by
Do I look young
My families all but died
I know your name
Why won’t you break this chain
Do you remember me
From the years gone by
We had some fun, but
Have changed through time
Do you remember us
Now life’s past me by
And I stand alone
The chains won’t break
And nobody knows
Will you remember me
When your grey and old
Will you remember me
When the tales told
Wil you remember me
In the tears you cry
Will you remember me
Up untill you die |
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burger
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Joined: Jul 05, 2005
Location: Norwich, UK
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 8:39 am |
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dirt
ubw newbie


Joined: Jul 07, 2005
Posts: 23
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| Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 3:41 pm |
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ummmmm, im not to sure bout this! I can't see any structure to what you've written. But i do like the last part, i would normally to prefer to listen to something which doesn't rhyme. However I like it Please post a link to where it is in song as i would like to hear it  |
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