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wykedwitch
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Joined: Jul 04, 2005
Location: 7th realm of hell
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:37 pm Reply with quote
As I walk through the room
I smell her perfume
She haunts me
From another tyme and place
With visions of her face

My mind is a blur My words are a slur
She haunts me
Without even trying
she set me off flying

I'm at a loss
For words on this
What is thecost
Of one small kiss

She gave
me what i asked
Now i pay the price
Her spell will always last
For all of my life

It doesn't surprise me now
But i do still wonder how
She haunts me
So relentlessly she does
I'll never be as i was

I'll never again know pleasure
At leastnot on her measure
She haunts me
She keeps me in hell
With her luscious spell......
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 6:41 am Reply with quote
Welcome Wykedwitch!!! Great to have you here!

I don't know how I missed these earlier, but I really like them!!!

I think your rhythm or meter works very well, and the subject matter is very interesting. With the right music, these could make a really cool song too!!!

I'm looking forward to reading more by you!
Ron
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