"Monster"

ubw rookie Joined: Jun 28, 2005 Posts: 133

Hey I just found this place so I thought Id post one of my songs, I just wrote this one so its not totaly done.

"Monster"

Living inside me feeding off your pain
Eating away at the sparkle in your eyes
Like poison coursing through my body
Loosen my chains I only want a taste

Hiding from the sirens filling the air
Painting the night red and blue
Before they come for me
Take my hand and follow me through
These nightmares and torn pages written as my life

Like a vampire feeding off your tears
Thirsty for your blood your heart on my plate
Take this silver bullet and put it through my head
Take my life now I don’t deserve to live
I live only to hurt you I live only to take

A monster disguised in my love to lure you in
Under the full moon please grant me this last kiss
I need it now before it’s too late
Set me free with the antidote laced on your lips
Only you can set me free
Only you can burn me at the steaks

Hiding in the shadows protecting you from me
I can’t look you in the eyes
I can’t tarnish those innocent blue eyes
Slowly turning red from the tears I’ve caused you to shed
As you sleep so innocently in the night
I’ll whisper the words that mean everything to me
But words don’t mean anything to you

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:02 pm

Hi hereafter and welcome to the UBW!!! It's great to have you here and thanks for sharing some of your words!!!

I like these lyrics, and I think your symbolism is very strong. They are a touch dark for my usual taste, but nonetheless, the writing is good!!!

Looking forward to reading more of yours!!!
Ron

Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 1:24 am

I like this piece a lot. It is very thought provocative. As Ron said, the symbolism is great. -Very enjoyable. Cheers!

RiCterMan

"Monster"

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