JackSharp
ubw newbie
Joined: Jun 23, 2005
Location: Anglesey, North Wales, United Kingdom.
Posts: 9
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| Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 3:08 pm |
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Sitting alone,
For hours at home,
A thousand visions, flash through my mind,
I'll hang on 'til Friday, to leave them behind.
Friday night, I hit the bars,
The beer comes flowing into the jars,
Sometimes I feel shit,
Sometimes like a star,
But nobody really knows who they are.
Woman I'm frozen I am shaking,
Woman I'm giving and you're taking,
Woman I'll be in a haze for days,
Woman are you the exit of this maze.
The ones I like are just too nice for me so I tell them,
No words of love,
Someone said they wanted personality but I know,
That it's just hand in glove.
So then at home alone again,
Lonely, frightened, sick on my own,
All I want's to see her face,
All I wants to hear her phone.
Woman I don't know what's goin' on,
Woman all I can do is sing this song,
I don't even do it too well,
But what the hell. |
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hereafter
ubw rookie
Joined: Jun 28, 2005
Posts: 133
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| Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 3:53 pm |
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Hey, I've read all the lyrics youve posted and this is the only one I really like, no offence but the other ones seem like jokes. The rhyming scheme is too nursery rhym, but this one flows nice, get rid of some of the constant rhyms and it would be really good.
just my opinoin |
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