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Moresco
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Joined: Jul 23, 2004
Location: Redfield, SD
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| Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 10:25 am |
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These are lyrics to a track that was going to be on our first CD but now is probably going to wait for a 2nd CD or maybe a single or something. Hope you like it! ^^
Too Cold:
Air is cold in here
The temperature so low
So low
Why the question asked
Again she asks again
Why again will she ask
Somewhere answers lie
Liars all liars crying
I hear them crying
She asks the question
I hear her say it loud
Too loud my ears ache
They're lying in a field
Answers there we see
Dying they're still sobbing
Again again again she asks
Why why does she ask
Her mouth the torment asking
Why?
I hear her crying in a field
She's asking why again
Answers dying won't refuse
Her answers come and go
They're dying in a field
The air is cold in here
-Moresco
A Certain Measure of Nothing |
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unproject
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Joined: Jul 01, 2004
Location: Turkey
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| Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 10:27 am |
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uh ron is da man about lyrics and stuff. this looked nice to me though.
cheers again. |
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Moresco
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Joined: Jul 23, 2004
Location: Redfield, SD
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| Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 2:06 pm |
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Thanks, it's pretty simple. You can read into it alot, but it's basically about loss and that empty feeling that accompanies it. When I wrote it I was dwelling on that alot and I wondered how it would feel if you never found closure. A friend of mine said that she always felt that way, and that she felt it hurt less when it was really cold. Anyway that explains a bit of it, there's more but now it probably will make more sense. |
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unproject
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| Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 2:39 pm |
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umm.. well as far as my english tells me i like these lyrics. and i have realized you have a good-looking pic there man, is that really you? |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
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| Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2004 2:40 pm |
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I tend to write a tad dark myself so I can certainly relate!
Great poem, I bet the song is great as well!
Ron |
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Moresco
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Joined: Jul 23, 2004
Location: Redfield, SD
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| Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2004 1:59 am |
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Yup that's me, this is a larger version of it:
Thanks minusme, the song is pretty good and I decided that I will put the song up on my artist page here soon. Needs a remix first...as does everything else I put together last week heh. |
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amazonblonde
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Joined: Jun 16, 2004
Location: Detroit
Posts: 331
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| Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 4:37 pm |
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what kind of music is this?
giving constructive critism it seems a little repetive maybe try a thesaurus change up the words..other than that good job |
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