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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:14 am |
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Remember the days,
when we used to sit and talk,
for hours and hours?
Your problems were my problems.
And my problem was you.
f**k knows how we drifted apart.
It didn't seem likely at the time.
You got your problems sorted.
I'm still crippled by mine.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
Even if you don't have time for me.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
Remember the time,
I told you I loved you?
I didn't mean it.
Your problem was me.
You sorted it the day you cut me free.
f**k knows how we drifted apart.
It didn't seem likely at the time.
You got your problems sorted.
I'm still crippled by mine.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
Even if you don't have time for me.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
I don't feel the way I did before.
Atleast then there was hope.
f**k knows how we drifted apart.
It didn't seem likely at the time.
You got your problems sorted.
I'm still crippled by mine.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
Even if you don't have time for me.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
Even if you don't have time for me.
I wanted you to know;
I'll always have the time for you...
If you want to hear a copy, check out www.myspace.com/blacksound/
Reviews/feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Tom / The Blacks |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:22 am |
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Very nice piece of work. I wouldn't change a thing, if I were the one who wrote this. Kepp posting! Cheers to you!
RiCterMan |
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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:26 am |
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To be honest... I'ts not my best work. A little too obvious for my liking. I usually like to write messages into it that arn't as blatent... but I like the way it sounds, especially how the ending goes with the guitar part, so I thought I would share.
If people were more responsive around here, I would post alot more... but as it is, it's a little pointless, as I only ever seem to get 1 or 2 peoples points of view. |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:35 am |
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Yeah man thats sweet. I take it this is rock or metal?? im a big fan Of loads of music from hip hop mainly to REM, U2, Blues, funk and some (only some lol) metal. But this was nice, if u tell me ur music orientation il be able to leave you proper feedback! Cheers |
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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:37 pm |
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I don't realy like to categorize. I'm not good at it. If I had to give a genre I would say pop-punk or grunge.
There's a link to our stuff if you click the image in my sig. |
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