unbroken_silence
ubw newbie
Joined: Mar 26, 2005
Location: I'm here..in this hellhole.
Posts: 9
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| Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2005 1:57 pm |
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These were written earlier this year...around March or April..but they aren't quite finished but I think what I have so far isn't too terrible. Feedback please!!
Run Away
Save me
From all that I've become
Break me
Away so I can run
Take me
So far from what has begun
I'll show you
I'm telling you the truth
Believe me
I'll never lie to you
Deceiving
Thought it may be
I beg you'll trust in me
[Chorus]
Trapped in this swarm of chaos
You, my love, are all that I have now
Love is fear, don't be afraid
Take my hand, we'll run away
Yea..that's all I have so far..still wondering if I'll be able to finish them considering I can't remember what I was feeling when I wrote these..well anyway, I would like to hear what anyone thinks.. |
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