BeccaDanae
ubw newbie
Joined: Jun 07, 2005
Location: dont have
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 1:17 pm |
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1st song
will you ever remember me
after you've left me behind
and then when you want to think things over again
cause you've relized what a fool you where
since sometimes i'm just not good enough
for the moment but deep down under the
hour things seem so much more realistic
so you decide you can't seem to survive
without that time that we had
I told you not to leave me behind but you said don't worry cause I could never do that
I can't believe I took that and ran a
nd thought it'd last cause as soon as the hour passed you'd be back to me but not this time you can have it you're way
cause I'm not chaning my mind
this time it's now or never you can have it you're way
thats perfectly fine with me don't plan on
turning back to see my standing there waving hello
cause this time the days past day's turned to night and this time it's my turn to give you the final verdict..
have it you're way you had the
chance but you took it and lost it
now I'm just sorry i trusted you with my life,
told you everything that ever mattered
so will you ever look back..
cause I hope you're happy i'll cherish theese memories
right before i burn them in flames
you can look back but don't count on me to be there,
atleast not this time..
it's your chance you've got the final verdict
before night turns into day and i'm begging you to
please let me know will night turn into day and the
summer grow cold and gray
Second Song
Lost in a world of hopeless dreams
So small so little just like a ember lost in a world of hopes and dreams
When nothing makes sense and what you want to happened never does
Things seem so hopeless so unrealistic
Why wish for more why dream for the best when all that comes is the least
Day and night don’t seem that different cause every nightmare is just another dream come true
Can’t it matter I know that man up there wonders and cares but it seems so hard and so oblivious to think it all reaches him it’s amazing to think sometime my unrealistic dreams could come true
For now I’m lost in a sea of broken things with no matter and no hope just something empty and bleak
So if you ever pass by give me a thought before walking on
I’d be great to know somebody out there cares
Cares as much as a I do these dreams keep getting in the way of life
Something meant to be something that should
I know there’s that man up there
But for now I’m gonna keep on looking out and maybe that sunset will put itself back together again
All will be clear in a world all to empty and broken
But away from it all I can finally see my dreams coming true my hopes and my wishes
Something in you’re eyes tells me it’s all not to far away that soon someday it will all be very clear |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:55 pm |
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Hi & Welcome to the Unsigned Band Web...
You've got some very personal lyrics there and you do a good job of conveying yoru emotions!!!
Your style is conversational as opposed to verses, which is pretty unique. Your two writings here are pretty sad too  , I hope you can write some happy lyrics soon!!!! 
I enjoyed your words!
Ron |
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