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ChocolateChurros
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Joined: Jun 06, 2005
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| Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:30 pm |
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I'm new and all. I know there are plenty of mistakes but please don't be a spellchecker for me. Thanks.
Secret
This feeling of a deeper meaning
I need it so I can survive
The knowledge that all things just are
It's not a truth in which I like
I hold on tight with clamping hands
and prepare for the ride of my life
I'm willing to let all of it go
I'll hold on with all my might
It's sad that human emotion is a fragile as a fly
It's sad that most all of us are living inside of a lie.
We call them truth and yet we know inside there is no fact
We should have known someday that these "beliefs" would be attacked.
[Chorus]
There are people out there who have experienced the hidden.
The secret that is never told.
The secret that's forbidden.
There are people out there who have seen the lie
The lie that is kept secret
The secret that will someday die
There are people out there who have learned to live free
A life without cults and fake answers
A life that's meant for me
There are people out there who have learned to be themselves
Who won't be munipulated
and put on a shelf
There are people out there who have the chance to be
Whatever it is in their mind
that they might want to be
Don't let yourself live like the fools who live all around you.
Be the one to stand your ground and be the one who knows
Don't be the one who charges against the coming of the truth
Hold the truth as your weapon and stand against your foes.
The secret that they all try really hard to protect
That secret will let us live a life which we can perfect.
But if this lie were to be found and all the truths exposed.
All of the answers they think they have would wither like a rose.
[Chorus]
There are people out there who have experienced the hidden.
The secret that is never told.
The secret that's forbidden.
There are people out there who have seen the lie
The lie that is kept secret
The secret that will someday die
There are people out there who have learned to live free
A life without cults and fake answers
A life that's meant for me
There are people out there who have learned to be themselves
Who won't be munipulated
and put on a shelf
There are people out there who have the chance to be
Whatever it is in their mind
that they might want to be
(c) ChocolateChurros (L.S.J.B.L) '05 (Steal, you die) |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:41 pm |
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Welcome to the Unsigned Band Web!
Nice job on the poem! I think you've done a great job of expressing some deep subject matter! Do you have this set to music???
Ron |
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ChocolateChurros
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Joined: Jun 06, 2005
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| Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:43 pm |
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| minusme wrote: | Welcome to the Unsigned Band Web!
Nice job on the poem! I think you've done a great job of expressing some deep subject matter! Do you have this set to music???
Ron |
I have kind of a tune in mind. But not really "set" to music. heh. ^^ And thanks for the welcome. ^^ |
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