I-let-my-senses-fail
ubw newbie
Joined: May 31, 2005
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 4:55 pm |
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[size=18] [/size]I dare not open my eyes
As what I see blackens my mind
Sick so much with life the joy I had
Now seems so far behind
And as I take these pills to sooth my pain
Defying maximum dose
Even though I am being selfish
Its what I want the most
How can I feel this is alright
When I’d give anything to end it tonight
But I’m alive only for my best friend
Well I feel just like a burden in the way
I knew what I had to do
But those words he said
Are now the barrier
And are what make me take each breath
‘if you go
Then I go
Your not getting out alone’
When the world didn’t give a f**k
And abandoned me,
Left me to die
You showed what it was like to be loved
And helped me
So what I’m trying to say
With this words that make no sense
But to me are like a thousand knifes
So every time that I smile
Or every time that I laugh
I owe everything all to you |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:24 pm |
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I-let-my-senses-fail,
I like your lyrics. The interesting thing about these is they are more like a conversation than poetry. I think that's pretty unique. Keep working at it!
 Sorry about the picklemonster .. It really wasn't meant for this thread... |
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