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Powelly
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Joined: May 22, 2005
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| Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 9:50 pm |
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Some of the chords don't fit in right and i haven't thought of how i want the ending of the song to sound like yet, but if you have a guitar, then strum along, as you read the lyrics 
©2005 Tom Powell |
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
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| Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 12:10 am |
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Great lyrics, and nice to see a few chords in there to get the reader involved. Top one. |
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martyboi
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Joined: Apr 24, 2005
Location: England
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Mon May 23, 2005 5:07 am |
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sixtysecondminute
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Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:18 pm |
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Not trying to be offensive... but you obviously have some abilities with writing lyrics. Dont waste them writing about suicide like so many others do. |
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