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MerciPourLeAmore
ubw newbie
Joined: May 19, 2005
Location: Republican shithole , Texas, U.S.
Posts: 13
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 9:41 pm |
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(sigh) Exhausted from all the trying
I can see you're happy.
I'm just a damsel in distress
that's all
This depression can't last forever
and i hate oppression
So i'll let go of what never was
and believe there was something
but, well
Nothing really matters
I'm living in vanity
and it's hard to change myself for better
You're all that i had
but you didn't know it
Everything's so unclear
And i'm sorry
For my hateful thoughts
jealousy, and tied up knots
Forgive me without ever knowing
Everything will be just fine,
I'm just a damsel in distress
waiting for an excuse to move on
So i'll let go
to what never was
and say there was something.
Nothing really happened
and nothing really matters
This is my excuse to move on,
and this depression only holds me back,
but i'm fine.
I'm fine.
And i'll miss you...just forever. |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:15 am |
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Wow!! Very powerful!
I really enjoyed reading these, you've done a good job of expressing emotion with some originality. |
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Brooksy
ubw screen dweller
Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:35 am |
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Normally I would cut and paste songs, then disect them like a mad scientist. Somehow I couldn't do this to Goodbye and Forever.
Emotionally powerful, and able to send shocks through all the right nerves is tough, and can never be done intentionally.
Very well done. Beutiful. |
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