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MerciPourLeAmore
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Joined: May 19, 2005
Location: Republican shithole , Texas, U.S.
Posts: 13
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 9:39 pm |
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This is so far from what i wanted
nothing seems to make me glad
I know you're not meant to entertain
But you could at least try to save me
I'm so bored
in my solitude
Empy Feelings about everything
When my eyes tear you make me angry
Everyone is boring
Save me from you
At last you'll finally understand this depression
once your hearts are in a blender
I beg to see new things now
I want to see your blood
Just ignore this and save me
i can't scream
i can't touch
i can't feel
I can't understand my point
Or why we're even here
It's funny when the world won't talk to you
or when your insides turn gray
You'll stop caring and save me
when you understand what hell is like |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:16 am |
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Interesting mix of literal imagery! Very dark, and filled with emotion.... Nice job! |
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:41 am |
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Reminds me a little of Alannis Morrisette. Another great lyric I'm finding to fault..or maybe I'm just happy today  |
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MerciPourLeAmore
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Joined: May 19, 2005
Location: Republican shithole , Texas, U.S.
Posts: 13
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 3:56 pm |
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Wow! thanks for the comments...it's my first time on the site, and so far i've seen so many talented writers on here--i'm jealous! =)
these lyrics aren't my favorite, and i don't understand why i posted them yesterday...but i'm glad to not be ridiculed.  |
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StephieJo
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Joined: May 14, 2005
Posts: 10
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:51 pm |
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Yeah these are cool lyrics, i can really understand how you feel with the words you're using,  GOOD JOB |
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
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| Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 12:37 am |
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Hey Merci, anytime. And we wouldn't ridicule anyone. I just know I'm better than everyone else  
Great to have you here |
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