New here, all of my writings...

ubw newbie Joined: May 14, 2005 Posts: 2

Hello, I was looking for a place to post some of my writings and stumbled across this forum. Here's some stuff (varying genres). Let me know what you think?

I want a girl
She can make me smile even if there's no tomorrow
She could look in to my eyes and understand
understand my unconditional love for her
understand that i'd give my life for her
she wouldnt care about the outside scenery
she wouldnt need to
cause she can see within me
see that i want to be with only her
we would wake up side by side
go on a random adventure, wouldnt even care to do our hair
we wouldnt care about the outsiders
because we're inside eachother for eternity
i would treat her how she was meant to be treated
like the princess she is
the goddess of my soul
we would fill eachothers empty holes
she'd point out the pimple on her nose
i couldnt even notice
i could see past her face
we wouldnt care about the pace we took things at
because looking back it was meant to be either way
we would only look forward to the next day
the day we would continue our partnership
the day we know we dont have to say i do
we have our love for eachother
and that's enough
she would look past each mistake
she knows what it takes
i know what it takes
we only need to be together
forever she'd be in my heart
together eachother forever
in love

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nigga you cant play when your in the scene
you'll find out soon enough what i mean
your lucks ran out
we'll come riding up in da truck with the 22's
ak-47's auto machines for smoking foos
dont f**k with us
dont f**k with our bank
we'll come at you like a heavy armored tank
come outcha house you little b**ch a** snitch
you wanted to fSck with this
well here you go
we knocking down the doe
you're all on the flo
shoulda thought about yo actions
before you went and fScked with our sanctions
you thought you could roll with the boys
now you know our guns aint just toys
begging for your life aint no way go out
we'll come up around the back of the house
ninja style, you wont even know what hit you
as our homeboys knife slits your throat
go on and gloat about fScking with us
just know we come riding in the night
ready for a fight

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You flirt with him as if he were me.
You let me in on the dirt you speak.
I don't want this shit in my head.
I don't need the image in my head of him asking for a peek.
You shouldn't be seeking him.
I'm just speaking my mind.
Don't treat me as if I were blind.
Don't say everything is fine.
CAUSE IT'S NOT
There's a line between love and f**king with peoples minds.
I've seen them both.
I thought this relationship was the most.
Now I've found out otherwise.
I can imagine the sound and sight.
f**k this why do I even fight it in my mind.
I know it's true.
What you want to do.
SO GO PERSUE YOUR NEXT PRAY
Day after day I wokeup with you in my head.
Now I wish we were both dead.
Easier said than done.
There's not the right one for me.
Maybe you know there will never be one for you.
So you go and do what you do.
I DON'T f**king CARE ABOUT THE EXCUSES.
You've hurt more than a hair on my body.
Being so naughty with him and them.
f**k IT

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I'm diffrent than other people
I don't see things as you do
I don't do things you do
I don't give a shit what you do
Some people might call me *** or tell me to f**k off
Just don't get in my way
I don't care what you have to say, go suck off your father
Don't bother talking to me
Don't bother walking my way
You live a lie, you're just another pathetic guy

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demonize me
i will still be a part of you
paralyze me
in your pure hatred
realize
what we had was never sacred
psychoanalyze
comfort yourself with my cries
forget me
unable to sanatize the filth
kill me
quilt yourself a blanket of distance
ignore me
see what you've been missing
i am just another vision of happiness gone wrong
calm yourself
for now i am no longer around
such quite sounds of peace
take it in easy but you'll still never forget me
here's another:
should i speak or should i stay quite?
i remember that night
the way nothing seemed right
i might as well say f**k you forever
hoping to feel clever
hurting you for hurting me
is this insanity? surely it must be
but deep down inside
i cry for you
i yearn for you
is it healthy?
nothing seems to be anyways
hey! you! your the latest craze!
set my eyes upon you in a ludacrous daze
i wish...we could just go back to the old ways...

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WE WERE ONCE FRIENDS
NOW I KNOW EVERYTHING COMES TO AN END
EVERYTIME I CLOSE MY EYES I SEE PITCHBLACK
I HEAR MY CRIES FOR FORGIVENESS
I KNOW IT WILL NEVER GO BACK
MY THOUGHTS USED TO BE COMPRISED OF YOUR BEAUTY
ALL I SEE IS MYSELF PITY
I KNOW WHO I AM NOT WHO YOU ARE NOT
I WAS A FOOL TO THINK I WAS WORTHY OF YOU
YOU SAW THAT GLIMMER IN MY EYES
YOU SAW THAT SWEETNESS IN MY VOICE
ALL YOU SEE IS NOTHING
ALL I HAVE IS MY CRIES OF SORROW
TOMORROW WILL JUST BRING MORE PAIN

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It's been a while
It's been a while since i've been able to sleep
I've been counting sheep but I know it's something deep
It's my feelings for you and how i was a creep
I don't know how to control myself
I don't know how to handle what I felt
I don't know who we are anymore
I just know I treated you poor
No more will I sleep with dreams of you
No more will I be speaking with you
I can't control these urges for you
I don't know what we've come to
But I know it's my fault and I am sorry
Please look inside me and try to forgive me
I know it's been awhile but no more can I take it.

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Your lord is not mine
My life is fine
No need for unproven hope
Take the rope in hand
And cut your self free
SUBMIT YOURSELF TO ME
COMMIT YOURSELF TO ME
ADMIT YOURSELF TO ME
Your history is not wanted in my eyes
Drop it all, stop your hideous cries
Stop pushing feebly to express yourself
Just because you're the majority
FSCK BY ME
EAT BY ME
WEEP BY ME
LIVE BY ME
I AM YOUR LORD
You don't need any control
You have that empty hole
Fill it all with idiocy
Nightly get on your knees
To appease your animal side
BELIEVE IN ME
SEE HOPE IN ME
Hide from the unknown
Fear concluding opinions on your own
Just remember how I was slain
and the pain i endured for your beliefs
FSCK YOUR LORD

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Over five hundred and sixty thousand dead in 2000
caused by your neighbors and country men
remember the three thousand slaughtered in nine eleven
a plane has been flown into humanity
respond
respond
throw our money and your politics at it
zero deaths caused by marijuana in 2000
except those shot by police men
respond
respond
throw our money and your politics at it
send the troops to the middle east
its just a childs game of revenge
take their innocence for your benefit
respond
respond
throw our money and your politics at it
drop the bombs once again
but this time stick with it till the end
another 800 of ours dead
respond
we have a problem

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weeew! Okay, opinions?

Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 12:01 pm

What's up root????

That's quite a contribution!!! To be honest your stuff is a little heavier than my taste, and you certainly take no prisoners with your opinions...

I think your instrospective lyrics are the best.. Fore example, the one that starts "it's been awhile"...

Take care!
Ron

ubw newbie Joined: May 14, 2005 Posts: 2

Thanks alot, I'm glad you liked it...The begging of it's been awhile is kind of corny, but it gets deeper...But again, thanks for your opinion, and whenever I write some stuff out, this is the first place it'll go. Smile

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