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TalkieLava
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 1:44 pm Reply with quote

some lyrics I just wrote


A sleep-full doze yet I lie awake
NO force on earth could denie my fate

I ambush prey for a easy meal
Emotions mean nothing for what I feel

Tearing the reasons that hold me back
this thing called love has turned black

What I create from dirt and dust
Makes me a man that has to crush

You could look me up with dictionary data
My whole outlook expands massive matter

Just a tease and a little taste
I eat lyrics and excrete music waste

Blow me up and proceed with caution
Im dangerous and can't be stoppn

till next time I write around
see is believing now that im found
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minusme
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 2:29 pm Reply with quote

I really like the rhythm you create with these lyrics, they read very well. The subject matter moves around a bit, but I like the way you present each line.

Thanks for sharing!
Ron
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