Alone On Repeat

ubw newbie Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 2

Hey, these are my first lyrics that i have posted on this message board because i only just found it. Please feel free to give your opinions on it, thanks.

Alone On Repeat
Feeling the anxiety
and replacing one side with another
Shallow quiet words forced to the screams
to maximise my chances to succeed

I can feel its all going no where again
I just wish someone could walk up to me now
And declare the ammunition is feeling smooth
And that they can proceed with me

When this comes to my mind i just feel the urge
to cry
All my friends can find the opposite half
How can something be so difficult?
A suffice that needs to be met
Just i know it wont

I can feel its all going no where again
I just wish someone could walk up to me now
And declare the ammunition is feeling smooth
And that they can proceed with me

Im still by myself and willing to drink
away whatever i have wished for
Silent sounds of sweetness and been cute
rise sometimes but sink in the fast lane
I can feel upbeat up to the time a bottle is empty

My days have been caught and remain on repeat
The same actions...
Same locations.....
I would welcome something new

I can feel its all going no where again
I just wish someone could walk up to me now
And declare the ammunition is feeling smooth
And that they can proceed with me

Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 6:26 am

Wow!!!!

I really like you're writing style... Most of your writing is very original, which i REALLY like. Your symbolism is placed very well, and I speak the words in a rhythm, which means they would probably make great song lyrics. Do you have these lyrics in a song? I would love to hear it!

Ron

ubw newbie Joined: Apr 13, 2005 Posts: 2

Unfortunately i dont have the lyrics in a song at the moment. Thank you very much though for the comments Very Happy

Alone On Repeat

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