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" Im Sorry" song Review please

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StillLaughing
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 10:51 pm Reply with quote

This song is also played on an acoustic guitar. Tell me if i should make any changes. Please review!

[align=center]"Im sorry"

Inrto: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry

Verse 1: I never meant to come home late i never
meant to hurt you with all these lies i never meant for
you to hurt yourself with all these lies i dont expect for
everything to fall back inro place i dont expect everything to
fall into place.

Chrous: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry

Verse 2: I nevr thought id be here all alone
i never thought youd leave me cold i never thought
id break your heart i dont expect for evreything to fall back
into place i dont expect everything to fall back into place.

Chorus ( fading out): Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry
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ImL
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 5:51 am Reply with quote



Looks good, how does it sound in your song? gotta link to it?

I never meant to come home late
i never meant to hurt you with all these lies
i never meant for you to hurt yourself with all these lies
i dont expect for everything to fall back into place
i dont expect everything to fall into place.

Chrous: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry

Verse 2:
I never thought id be here all alone
i never thought youd leave me cold
i never thought id break your heart
i dont expect for evreything to fall back into place
i dont expect everything to fall back into place.

Chrous: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry
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StillLaughing
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 6:22 pm Reply with quote

I dont have a link to it. I just got a new band so im just writing right now. Everything is played on acoustic guita, with drums and some songs have piano in it.
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