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StillLaughing
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Joined: Apr 05, 2005
Location: La Quinta, California
Posts: 10
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| Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 10:51 pm |
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This song is also played on an acoustic guitar. Tell me if i should make any changes. Please review!
[align=center]"Im sorry"
Inrto: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry
Verse 1: I never meant to come home late i never
meant to hurt you with all these lies i never meant for
you to hurt yourself with all these lies i dont expect for
everything to fall back inro place i dont expect everything to
fall into place.
Chrous: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry
Verse 2: I nevr thought id be here all alone
i never thought youd leave me cold i never thought
id break your heart i dont expect for evreything to fall back
into place i dont expect everything to fall back into place.
Chorus ( fading out): Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry |
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ImL
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Joined: Jun 25, 2004
Location: New Zealand
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| Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 5:51 am |
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Looks good, how does it sound in your song? gotta link to it?
I never meant to come home late
i never meant to hurt you with all these lies
i never meant for you to hurt yourself with all these lies
i dont expect for everything to fall back into place
i dont expect everything to fall into place.
Chrous: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry
Verse 2:
I never thought id be here all alone
i never thought youd leave me cold
i never thought id break your heart
i dont expect for evreything to fall back into place
i dont expect everything to fall back into place.
Chrous: Im sorry, im sorry, im sorry, im sorry |
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StillLaughing
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Joined: Apr 05, 2005
Location: La Quinta, California
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| Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 6:22 pm |
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I dont have a link to it. I just got a new band so im just writing right now. Everything is played on acoustic guita, with drums and some songs have piano in it. |
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