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bryceguitar
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 11:15 pm Reply with quote

I am 14 years old and have been playing around a year, this is my acoustic song, tell me what u think and ill return the favor
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 11:26 pm Reply with quote

Hi Bryce....

Listening to your song right now. You've got a lot of talent for 14 years old!!

One constructive bit of feedback. Your are getting some serious hum during the intro and some of the softer portions of your song. It makes it very difficult to listen to. Try turning down the gain on whatever recording equipment you have and you'll see it goes away. Also if you have a microphone made for an acoustic, you won't have to turn the gain up so much.

I would like to hear this song recorded better.

Take care and welcome to the Unsigned Band Web!
Ron
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bryceguitar
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 9:10 am Reply with quote

thanks man im cheking out tht gain thing, do u got a band 2 review?
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bryceguitar
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 11:18 pm Reply with quote

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dragon
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 11:33 pm Reply with quote

Whaz up Bryce,

Just listen to like Everyone else sounds good!
You play better than I did at 14 . I've been doing it 16 sixteen years now.
Like the tune it has good classic feel to it. I would like to here it in its completion.

-See Ya On The pliF- Dragon

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bryceguitar
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 11:57 pm Reply with quote

hybrid, reely cool stuff! i reely like it, cool vocals, u guys shood be likefamous, maybe u r lol, this is reely sweet stuff tho u guys rock nice guitar, drums, bass, everything i reely like it tho, veryyyyyyyy cool stuff keep it up!!!!
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dragon
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 12:11 am Reply with quote

Hey Bryce,

Glad you dig the tunes. Its all practice, practice, blood ,sweat and tears. I didn't start play until I was 14. You have great poetental keep up the good work.
_peace -Dragon-

P.S. If you get a chance cheak out my son band.
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:59 am Reply with quote

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RyanPowell
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 12:43 pm Reply with quote

Im realy not into your kinda music but you realy have somethin goin on for you! I look at this genre in a different style and would be great to work with you some-time! Amazin style and makes me want MORE! haha... great...
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 3:57 pm

I just had to let you know that you are simply amazing. I swear on my life my mom yelled from the other room , "Who is That?" I was like, "Some 14 year old kid who rocks. " All my mom and I can keep saying is, "WOW" ...Keep up the dedication!!!
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 4:02 pm

I would love for you to hear my tunes and let me know what you think. I am on theUnsigned Band Web
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/3416/

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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 7:19 pm Reply with quote

Not bad Bryce

Interesting overlay...

Nice feel, Not sure if you aren't mixing up your e- with an e+, but overall it is typical for a beginner in good ways and bad.

Good in that it has such nice feel, a young guy projecting such an enjoyment in what he is doing.
Bad if only that it is not too original.

But very nice feeling, and best wishes to you with any new thing you come up with..
You are on da right track..

Best wishes.

Seph
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