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unbroken_silence
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Joined: Mar 26, 2005
Location: I'm here..in this hellhole.
Posts: 9
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| Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 11:59 pm |
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Down
Can you hear them calling you
They will not leave without you
Listen to there silent pleads
Dragging you down oh so deep
You can't escape now
You'll keep going..
Down
Alone inside
With no one left to save you
Drown
Hold your breath
Let go of all you had
Farther down you slowly go
Pulled down into all things unknown
You reach for something you can't grasp
You know now that you won't last
You won't escape now
You'll keep falling..
Down
Alone inside
With no one left to save you
Drown
Hold you breath
And let go..
Let go of all you're holding on to
It's pointless when you're not strong enough
(You're still falling..)
Down
Alone inside
There's no one that can save you
Drown
Hold your breath
Let go of all you had |
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unbroken_silence
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:09 am |
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I'm only a beginner, so these lyrics may not be the best..But they're getting better..I think.. Oh well.  Tell me what you think, and..Yeea..Later |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:13 am |
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LOL... 
Welcome to the Unsigned Band Web!!!
I think you've got a really cool writing style here. I like the repetition of 'own' with down and then drown. I think in poetry they have a term for that...
Very cool!
Ron |
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cprmark
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Joined: Jan 24, 2005
Location: Oxford, Mississippi (USA)
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| Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 5:20 pm |
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NICE. I'd say these are good lyrics even if you weren't just starting out. Keep it up. |
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unbroken_silence
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Location: I'm here..in this hellhole.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 4:20 pm |
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Thanks you guys. I'll probably have some new lyrics posted in the next few days. But, yea. Thanks a lot for the support. Later. |
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unbroken_silence
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Joined: Mar 26, 2005
Location: I'm here..in this hellhole.
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| Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 2:53 pm |
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I told you I'd try to get some new lyrics posted..I keep my word..most of the time..anyways here they are.
Throw it Away
Give unto me
Begin to believe
Do not try to fight it
You belong to me
Give up
Give in
You're mine
You can't win
[Chorus]
I want to hear you screaming
I want to feel your pain
You'll never have a meaning
So just throw it all away
I know it hurts right now
Worry not, for the pain
Will soon die down
There's no way out
Give up
Give in
You're mine
You can't win
[Chorus]
This silent night brings itself upon us
You cannot run away from me
You'll never have a meaning
Throw yourself away
[Chorus X2]
Yea, they're weird and need some work, but yea. Tell me what you think.. Later  |
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