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Come Down and Starve Us (ALT COUNTRY)

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lincoln
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Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 4:18 am Reply with quote
Hi everyone,

I'm fairly new to songwriting and would appreciate any tips...

I wrote this song recently and just recorded this version tonight. My friend Blake (Buffalo Son) helped me out a little on the lyrics.

So here it is... Come Down and Starve Us

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?band_id=1939&song_id=5708&mode=song_hifi

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?band_id=1939&song_id=5708&mode=song_lofi

Thanks,
Lincoln Colm
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minusme
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Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 7:29 am Reply with quote
Welcome to the UBW forums Lincoln!!!!!

I'm listening to your tune now! Very nice folky feel. I like your acoustic rhythm, adn the violin sound good, but could be a touch louder... It think you should sing more pronounced. I like laid back singing, but it still feels like your hesitant in some of the verses. Nice job on the lyrics, well done!!!!

Enjoyed the song, looking forward to hearing more!

Ron
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lincoln
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Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 5:20 pm Reply with quote
Minusme,

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. I just bought the violin and have played it less times than I have fingers and toes, sorta the reason why it's buried. As my skill increases so will the volume!

More songs will come, that I promise you.

Thanks again!

Lincoln
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lincoln
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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 9:09 pm Reply with quote
Anyone else got any feedback? I'll return the favor...
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buffaloson
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Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 6:45 pm Reply with quote
Lincoln has a bit of a gift for creating heartfelt tunes. There is no "fake" involved. That's what I love most about his music. And about this song.
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