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buffaloson
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 3:04 am |
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buffaloson
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:32 pm |
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so I received some very useful suggestions from a user here. I ended up using the head of my banjo as a snare drum and added some percussion with that.
Better? Worse? Help please.
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unproject
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:09 pm |
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hey blake, dl'ed and listenin to your tune now. mix is nice imho. i hear the banjo n percs your talkin about and it sounds good to me. maybe with a little more reverb. rest is great, as always
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minusme
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:41 pm |
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Blake...
I really like the new song!!! It has a really classic feel to me, and the vocals are well done...
A couple of thougths on the mix....
-I think the 'snare' should be just a touch louder in the mix with some reverb added
-I would like to hear the vocal melody in the background louder in the mix, perhaps also with a little reverb
That's my .02 cents. Overall a really nice song, with great vocals..
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smili
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| Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 8:10 pm |
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Has a "Call me Mellow Yellow" feel.
I really don't have a problem with the mix. Like most of your stuff it has an authentic feel. There are a couple of places where the vocal and the organ part conflict at the end of some phrases, but that's not really a mix issue.
You've got the paino part carrying the bassline thump. wondering if using a bass for the bassline instead of the piano part clear out some frequencies for a different feel - but again - not that there's anything wrong with what you've got.
I didn't hear the tune before the banjo drums, but if you're wanting to add percussion some other types might work better. I've heard a guy play a tamborine with drumsticks on music like this and thought it worked really well.
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buffaloson
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| Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 12:43 am |
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Smili... do you think you could be a little more detailed about where that conflict between vox and keyboard takes place? I'd love to know what you're talking about so I can avoid doing that in the future. I have zero musical training.
Everyone.. you've been extremely helpful. I'm going to do what I can to use all your suggestions. I'll add some more reverb to the drumming for sure. I also want to improve a coule vox parts.
Thanks again, friends.
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buffaloson
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| Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:14 am |
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Okay..
I added reverb where ya'll suggested. I increased the volume of backing melody, as suggested. I tried to fill in that bass frequency, as suggested.
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minusme
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| Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 6:51 am |
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Trying to remember yesterdays recording....
I can hear the backing vocals better now, which I like. They were really tough to hear before, and I think they add a lot to the tune. The percussion sounds good as well. This song has a really authentic feel which gives it a lot of personality. Great job!
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smili
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| Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 8:49 pm |
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| buffaloson wrote: | | Smili... do you think you could be a little more detailed about where that conflict between vox and keyboard takes place? |
at 1:05 to 1:07 or so; another at around :1:58 to 2:00 or so. Just a dissonance there that bothers me a bit, but hey - it's music and I'm just one set of ears.
btw, wanted to echo comments on bgrd vox. like them.
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buffaloson
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| Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2005 1:09 am |
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| smili wrote: |
at 1:05 to 1:07 or so; another at around :1:58 to 2:00 or so. Just a dissonance there that bothers me a bit, but hey - it's music and I'm just one set of ears.
btw, wanted to echo comments on bgrd vox. like them.
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excellent. i'm gonna look that up. thank you. |
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