Please review MARS - original rock song

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MattJones
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2016 3:00 pm Reply with quote

Hi,
I could really use some feedback on my new song MARS

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JB3xlqyIbNk

I have this forum bookmarked so I'll check back periodically so will definitely see your comment, which would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you and I hope you enjoy the track! Smile
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ninnek
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Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2017 3:30 pm Reply with quote

I know its an old topic but here is my review anyway:

1. On first listen of the song, the instrumental part seemed very nervous to me, i think this comes from bass line. I feel a bassline with long sustained notes would fit this psychedelic feel way more.

2. I would add some sort of continous instrument in the back, maybe some gentle feedback, hum or wind.

3. Try out different solo sounds - i dont think this one is ideal.
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kashanetiger
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Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2017 7:28 pm Reply with quote

It sounds rough but its my first time hearing it. Who knows if I listened to it a bunch more times it might grow on me in time. However, the song did not hook me right away. Your music differently has potential. Please check out my video and original: Calling You. https://youtu.be/B1tb70ikLgU

Also, check out my FREE ebook: The Essential Singing Tips http://nationcreationsing.launchpad.inboxblueprint.net/?ver=0
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AlexCarrillosMusic
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2017 10:35 pm Reply with quote

sounds a tab bit jumbles :S but other than that i can see it becoming somthing great! nice work
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:25 am Reply with quote

Get better with time
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