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patternagainstuser
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Joined: Nov 28, 2004
Location: Essex, England
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| Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 2:32 pm |
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can someone give a review for one of songs, "the arsonist's biography"? it's the most mellow of our tracks and being the last on our list of songs it hasn't had much feedback. Check out the lyrics too, they are pretty sick lol. If someone gives a detailed review for me and they ask, i will review a song of theirs too. Thanks guys, heres the link
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/2326/ |
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overgrowneden
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Joined: Dec 16, 2004
Location: Turkey/Istanbul
Posts: 104
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| Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 2:45 pm |
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As fan of thursday I have to say that your songs are really cool.I dig them all.Especially "Splinters" .But be carefull when you record double vox.Hmm what elsee.Oov guitars level is a bit low I think.Rest is really cool.Looking forward to hear more from you guys.  |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3684
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| Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 3:07 pm |
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I LOVE the mellow feel of this song. The lyrics and vocals are both haunting and sound great over that cool intro. I love the guitar riff and how it just seems to be doing it's own thing. I like the lyrics being sung forceful over music that's not, I think that really adds impact to the vocals.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED.... Great job guys, this song is awesome!!!
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dfranklin77
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Joined: Nov 14, 2004
Location: Santa Clara, California
Posts: 69
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| Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 3:39 pm |
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unproject
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Joined: Jul 01, 2004
Location: Turkey
Posts: 2140
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| Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 7:09 am |
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very "modern" sounding track, great job on vox and guitars. overall mix needs some compression i think, but good stuff, well produced.
peace |
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 7:14 am |
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Wow, great track guys. Got the Chilli's funk-style in there. Vocals seem a little "shy" but suit the track style nevertheless. Well done.  |
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patternagainstuser
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Joined: Nov 28, 2004
Location: Essex, England
Posts: 14
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| Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2005 4:21 pm |
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sorry i dont have time atm, but i will leave a review of one of ur songs soon. i think ive checked you out before anyway, i liked ur stuff it was cool. tell me the song u want me to listen to.  |
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patternagainstuser
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Joined: Nov 28, 2004
Location: Essex, England
Posts: 14
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| Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 6:47 pm |
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ok, i listened to harper's folly, its a sweet track, i don't usually listen to instrumentals but i'd listen to this, its cool. Has a driving feel, and the harmonies are good, but in a way its sumthin i'd listen to for chillin out, its nice. |
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patternagainstuser
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Joined: Nov 28, 2004
Location: Essex, England
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| Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 3:26 pm |
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thanks for everyone thats reviewed us so far. will anyone else give us a review? thanks. i'll review you too if u ask me. |
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Soulfish
ubw luminary
Joined: Nov 07, 2004
Location: Brighton
Posts: 707
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| Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 10:18 pm |
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The guards - great guitar sound - heavy dirty evil.... Got a touch of System of a Down going on I reckon. Nice guitar work. Well thought out tracking(guitars). Your drummer sounds like his double kick should be good live. Ended just when I was getting in to it. How about a middle eight?
Splinters - Another good quality recording and mix - I'd have staggered the vocal to heighten the freaky effect on the verses. Maybe sung through a megaphone on the second vocal on the chorus or something. Like the fact you've thought out a good few sections as well. Reckon it would rock live
The Arsonists Biography - Starts very Marillion (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fish_(singer)) which is a good thing. Quite progressive rock vibe with nice touches in the toms and harmonies. Like the "Burn down the nursing home" verse alot. Got a real cool vibe.
Considering your age and how long you've been going - you guys have got a real future ahead of you if you can stick at it. I enjoyed the music and it has hints at a new take on things going on that could give you an edge- hell of alot better than most 15 year old crews you hear giggin around town.
Keep on keepin on 
If you fancy hearing how we do it - suggest you check out Filed Away, I don't mind and Sunflowers . |
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configurationcheat
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| Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:55 pm |
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sounds wicked, but watch ur second vocals. ok mix but it will improve as you get used to it. Guitar instrumentals are coming on, make sure they arent drowned out. great lyrics too. Well done - u sound really different - alot better than most stuff out. try some more experimental stuff - it will take you far! xx(guess who?) |
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patternagainstuser
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Joined: Nov 28, 2004
Location: Essex, England
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| Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:36 pm |
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thanks alot. that demo was recorded in october, we've been together twice as long now so we're coming on. 'guess who?' who is it? |
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