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RJ
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:31 pm |
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smili
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 8:46 pm |
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| RJ wrote: | | I'd love a good, honest opinion for my first Unsigned Band Web track The Night City Theme. |
RJ - I haven't listened yet, but requiring both a good _and_ honest opinion constrains my responses 
OK listening now - this isn't a genre I normally listen to. There are some folks here who do ambient and electronica that are probably better positioned to evaluate. rechat, unproject, aleK?
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Jinxi
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:19 am |
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RJ , what did you use to make it? |
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RJ
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:54 am |
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Cubase....the only thing you'll ever need, lol....  Will also be working with FL and Reason soon, hopefully. |
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unproject
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 10:06 am |
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well, the tune has a potential but i think it needs more work on synthing, eqinq and mastering. it's really good written but it sounds too raw if ya know what i mean.
keep up good work and welcome!
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RJ
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 11:50 am |
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Thanks for the review. I agree it is a little raw, still getting used to working with software...I'm a bit of a computer dunce. Thanks again, much appreciated. |
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dfranklin77
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 12:54 pm |
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RJ,
I really like the layers piano chords. The other keyboard parts seem to clip a little bit and sound distorted.
I see the Jan Hammer influence. I used Cubase for my recordings and it is a tough program to master. Good luck!
2:47 is cool!
Check me out!
David Franklin
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/2114/ |
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RJ
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| Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:35 pm |
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Hi David, thanks for listening. Checked out your music, excellent tracks. |
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overgrowneden
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| Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 7:28 am |
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Hi just listening to your song now, as unproject said the tune is really great but it needs eq. and mastering.compressing would be helpfull in this case I guess.Looking forward to hear more from you .  |
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