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BEBE
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 12:46 pm Reply with quote

Welcome to mmy tied up space

Where I see people fall in their graves

Without doing a thing

Without regetting a sin

Soldier Soldier

What is your game

You are sending us

Emotionally insane


No healing hand for someone who dies

Who hears the lonely mother who cries

The whole world needs to make a change

Innocent minds cannot keep taking the blame

Soldier Soldier what is your game

You are sending us emotionally insane


The only thing the battlefiedl grows is flies

The only thing the battlefield grows is flies


Soldier Soldier what is your game

You are sending us emtionally insane




Written in 2002 by John from BEBE in collabaration with others

Written with the deepest respect for soldiers who are experiencing a hell that we can't even begin to imagine and deepest respect for all mothers whose sons are having to go to war

We have tried to think what soldier soldier could be replaced by LEADER LEADER?

We hope everyone understands the meaning


Who are the soldiers is it everyone of us

We don't necessarily have to be going to war to contribute to the world's problems.

Noone can preach to anyone else till they sort out their own backyard can they?

Including me


Posted with Love and Respect BEBE
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:06 pm Reply with quote

1/ Welcome to mmy tied up space

2/ Where I see people fall in their graves

3/ Without doing a thing

4/ Without regetting a sin

5/ Soldier Soldier

6/ What is your game

7/ You are sending us

8/ Emotionally insane


9/ No healing hand for someone who dies

10/ Who hears the lonely mother who cries

11/ The whole world needs to make a change

12/ Innocent minds cannot keep taking the blame

13/ Soldier Soldier what is your game

14 You are sending us emotionally insane


15/ The only thing the battlefiedl grows is flies

16/ The only thing the battlefield grows is flies


17/ Soldier Soldier what is your game

18/ You are sending us emtionally insane


Interesting lyric, although I do have a point or two.

In oline 2 it would be better to say "FALL FROM GRACE" than "From their graves." In an Englsih Lit kinda way, you can't fall from a grave, only fall too it. So "FALL TO THEIR GRAVES" would be equally as good.

Also, I don't know if lines 9 & 10 are connected, but if they are:
Replacing "WHO" for "OR" would literally be more correct.

These are just very minor points, that really would not be noticed. I offer these suggestions just because I spotted them while reading. Take them with a pinch of salt. Really, it's what you're comfortable with that counts.

Again..thoght provoking, and interesting lyric.
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BEBE
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:13 pm Reply with quote

Thanks for your help
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:22 pm Reply with quote

Thanks to everyone who is taking the time to read BEBE's lyrics.

Sometimes just getting things out there and knowing that people have time for you really helps.

Apologies for bring such despair especially at this time of year.

It's good to have somewhere to get things off your chest.

Love you all BEBE
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 5:10 am Reply with quote

BEBE wrote:
Thanks to everyone who is taking the time to read BEBE's lyrics.

Sometimes just getting things out there and knowing that people have time for you really helps.

Apologies for bring such despair especially at this time of year.

It's good to have somewhere to get things off your chest.

Love you all BEBE


Cathartic and entertaining - the irony of truly great music! Wink

Weeeeee'rree on the roooooooaaaad to nooooooooowhhheeeeerrrrrrreeeee...... Come on - Sing it.....

Thissssssss isss not my beautiful wiiiiiifeee..... Wink
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BEBE
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 9:30 am Reply with quote

Thanks Soulfish Bless yoo
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 9:50 am Reply with quote

Once in a lifetime...water flowing underground....

..same as it ever was.... same as it ever was....

BEBE...

Again, really heartfelt lyrics. Lots of emotion running through those vains, keep it up!!!!

Ron
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 11:46 am Reply with quote

again good stuff right there, as usual
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BEBE
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 12:24 pm Reply with quote

Oh thank you guys. Sometimes I think someone whould ban me from these forums

because I just can't help myself putting it out there, and sometimes I think I go too far,

but if it is apreciated then that is great.lol
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BEBE
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 2:11 pm Reply with quote

Thanks Ron that helps me put things into perspective Love BEBE
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