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Brooksy
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 11:16 am Reply with quote

Hope you all like this one. It's basically about the last 2 minutes of my first marriage, and it's dedicated to all those who'be "been there".
Sent with love and respect,
Brooksy

ONE LAST HOPE
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On the streets tonight
There's people loosin' their names
On the beach tonight
There's lovers playin' foolish games
In this house tonight
A romance is freezing to death
In this body tonight
There'll be just one last breath

One last hope
One last prayer

In this soul right now
All the barriers are down
In this heart right now
All emotions drown
In this mind right now
I can't think how to rescue us
In this mouth right now
Might as well be spoken in code

One Last Hope
One last prayer

Out in the night
A broken heart hits the floor
Out in the night
The future has gone out the door
Out in the night
I lay battered cursed
Out in the night
Is the only refuge for the hurt

One last hope
One last prayer
One last hope
One last prayer
One last hope
One last prayer
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BEBE
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 11:39 am Reply with quote

WOW You've expressed what so many of us can't but there is always one last hope one last prayer BEAUTIFUL
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Brooksy
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 12:49 pm Reply with quote

Thanks. Appreciated. Very Happy
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KinMusic
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 3:48 pm Reply with quote

Nice song. You can definately feel the desperate hope in that sort of situation. I have never been married, but I had a three year relationship with this girl. As it was ending I remember feeling that everything we worked for and everything that i looked forward to was coming to a close. You really capture the intimate nature of that experience.

-Ryan
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Brooksy
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Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 4:28 pm Reply with quote

Thanks Ryan...I try, lol.
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shanetelford
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2005 6:51 pm Reply with quote

Brooksy,

I take my hat off to you, I've been reading your lyrics today and these are definitely the most suprerior, so much emotion has clearly been used and i'm glad to say i'm a member of forums which host other talented guys as yourself.

well done.

cheers

shane
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Brooksy
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2005 7:18 pm Reply with quote

Why thankyou Shane.
Embarassed

Just write how y' feel. Wink
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