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BEBE
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 8:34 am Reply with quote

On a Black Stallion

He came out of the sea

And on that Black Stallion

He came to rescue me

And as the moon floated in the sky

I watched him turn the tide

Riding so high


Every girl needs her hero

Every girl needs her hero


From a Black Chariot

He beckoned to me

He promised freedom

And liberty

And as I walked

He parted the sea

And he did it for me


Every girl needs her hero

Every girl needs her hero


Any reviews kindly apreciated

Thanks guys for comments on AS THE FLOWER GROWS

Love BEBE
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Brooksy
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 8:38 am Reply with quote

Hiya BEBE.

Well first that's a beutiful little tale, you got going there.

The rythmic pattern was undisturbed all the way through making it for easy reading, ie the flow was 15/10!! Wink

I got an Enya feel while reading it, dunno if that's an influence or not. Short sweet chorus line, but maybe a bridge to break up the rest. Personally I don't think this song would need a chorus, so having Every girl needs her hero as a simple bridge would probably bring this song right out.

Excellent work, I can say no more. Very Happy
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BEBE
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 1:09 pm Reply with quote

Thanks Brooksy You sure do know your music getting all that from the lyrics alone.

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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 1:18 pm Reply with quote

Hi

Really dig these lyrics! It seems that it should be as deep as just "simple" or funny....I can imagine them on all kinds of music!

Really dig it....waiting for the whole song now....

Peace

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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 1:28 pm Reply with quote

good stuff right there, diggin it surely

peace
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BEBE
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 2:48 pm Reply with quote

Yeah I can see that the song could take on different meanings depending on how it was played out!

Peace and Love to you all BEBE
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Brooksy
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 6:56 pm Reply with quote

BEBE wrote:
Thanks Brooksy You sure do know your music getting all that from the lyrics alone.

Love BEBE


Lol, just spent an awful lot of time reading lyrics.
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