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Maisie
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Joined: Oct 05, 2004
Location: Allen, TX
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| Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 5:22 pm |
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This was my first full Adobe Audition project, so go easy on me.
The lyrics for this song can be found in the lyrics forum. Please listen to it and let me know what you think. Again... I tried putting a solo in it. If that doesn't seem to work, I can take it out. I also decided to see how it would sound if I added harmonics, so during the bridge right before the solo ("Imaginations wreaking hell...") I've added in a second vocal track of myself harmonizing with... myself.
So let me know
Thanks,
Jack Maisie, Jr.
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?band_id=1650&song_id=2803&mode=song_lofi
Edit : added link for the lazies- alek |
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Maisie
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Joined: Oct 05, 2004
Location: Allen, TX
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| Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 9:16 pm |
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So good you're all at a loss for words, I see.
Well, what can I say?
I'm flattered! |
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alek_acero
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Joined: Apr 23, 2004
Location: madagascar
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| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 5:29 am |
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Hi!
Really dug the chillin intro...so sweet and how it comes back at 2'09...& 5'14. The melody at the end is so nice!
All in all I had a good feeling listening to your track...Something moody caught me!
Keep up the good work!
peace
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unproject
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Joined: Jul 01, 2004
Location: Turkey
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| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 6:46 am |
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yeah, nice tune indeed. well done..
peace |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
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| Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 8:05 am |
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Maisie,
Nice tune! I like the slow whispy feeling to the vocals, and the little arpeggio you do on the guitar!!!!
<-- now for the constructive part... Your guitar is a touch out of tune and it distracts a little from the song! That's an easy fix!!
Take care,
Ron |
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