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ubw newbie Joined: Jul 19, 2009 Location: London Posts: 25

It's called Townie. Feel free to comment on any othe songs we have done. The feedback would be appreciated!!!!!

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/13438/

Townie........tell us what you think!!!!!!!

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 567

cool project but the voice is a bit dry.

i really enjoy the instrumental a lot.

just try to master/make fit the vocals on it better.

this is my only advice cause the song is cool Smile

ubw rookie Joined: May 13, 2008 Posts: 78

THE THING I LIKE ABOUT THIS TRACK IS ITS MINIMALISM.IT REMINDS ME OF THE OLD NEW WAVE BAND WIRE.YOU COULD LAYER THIS WITH ALL SORTS BUT IT WOULD LOSE ITS AUTHENTICITY.VOCALS ARE GOOD AND THE SUBJECT MATTER IS CURRENT,KEEP THE SIMPLICITY IT WORKS........

ubw newbie Joined: Jul 19, 2009 Location: London Posts: 25

Thanks for the feedback branchedangel and also pbb. perhaps the voice doesnt sit great in the mix but it is just a demo and a 1 take. Thanks for listening and commenting on the lyrics branchedangel. Much appreciated.

ubw newbie Joined: Nov 06, 2009 Posts: 6

Great lead vocal! Very "Doors"-like sound. Is that what you are going for?
Assuming this is a demo, think about thickening the sound in the final once you get into the first chorus, but other than that, the groove comes across well. Good luck with this.

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ubw rookie Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 147

Great voice. Very expressive and agressive without being too in your face.
It is a dry vocal but I don't really mind it. I do think the whole piece is kind of punk like so all is fitting. Good composition. -rl

ubw newbie Joined: Jul 19, 2009 Location: London Posts: 25

Thanks Lodato and epmusic. I also like the minimalism and the coldness of it all. Certain members of the band may disagree but we will let democracy speak.... Cheers fo the feedback!!!

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