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yajb35
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:05 pm Reply with quote
Usually when I'm hurting I produce ballad timed lyrics. Not tonight. Driving screaming rock beat in my head for these. Strange.

LOVE ALWAYS

I remember……

I swear it was just yesterday
You put your hand in mine
I swear it was just yesterday
I shivered down your spine

Could it‘ve been just yesterday?
Cause today you say I’m gone
Could it’ve been just yesterday?
You say I’ve been gone all along

You said love always
You said you said you said
You said love always
You said you said you said

I looked at you the other day
You weren’t even there
I looked at you the other day
You didn’t even care

I told myself it couldn’t be
You always were just mine
I told myself it couldn’t be
Was I wrong (right) the whole time?

Cause you said love always
You said you said you said
You said love always
You said you said you said

You said we’d always be
You said you'd die for me
You said please never leave
You said you said……….

You said love always
And I believed

INTUITION

Please let me help you
Why don’t you want me to?
I really need to help you
I know what’s wrong with you

The people you are listening to
They don’t know your soul
It’s me who always knew
Please... why won’t you stop this all?

Cause I know what you need
And I know who you should be
Exactly what I said you feel
Is what you should believe

MAKE THESE VOICES STOP
They are never wrong
And I don’t want to know anymore

What good is knowing this
If you won’t let me help
Why won’t you listen to me
You know I’m never wrong

They poisoned your soul
Just like they did before
Killed off the girl we loved
Left us this open sore

Cause I know what you need
And I know who you should be
Exactly what I said you feel
Is what you should believe

MAKE THESE VOICES STOP
They are never wrong
And I don’t want to know anymore
Cause knowing doesn’t mean anything
If it means I have to be alone

And I don’t want to be alone anymore
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texter-bernd
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:41 am Reply with quote
"love always" is perfectly written. I'm hearing a pop tune with this one, but never mind. Excellent job.

"intuition" I interpret as a teenage emancipation song (the admonishing voice of a parent), female voice (the first person). Could well come across with a rather agressive tune for the chorus that expresses rage and frustration. The music will have to provide a strong support for both parts of the structure (verses versus chorus) to assist listeners interpreting them. But that can well be achieved and will make it a great song.

You say "thanks for listening" - is there a place one can actually hear them recorded?

Bernd
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