if you love me- new overdue song...lemme know what ya think

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:52 pm

haven't been on in a bit... thought i do some updating..... let me know what ya think....

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?mode=song_hifi&band_id=11768&song_id=31573

ubw rookie Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 147

I love the song. I don't love the levels or eq especially on the vocals. Way too much high end. Sounds like the wrong mic maybe? You need a compressor on the vocals to tighten the dynamics a bit. But the performance and the delivery are wonderful. Guitar solo is icing on the cake. I really want to hear a better recording of this song as I like it that much. -rl

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 567

Whispered trashed mid band vocals with low tones of guitar,

Not bad but you should try to master it better.

Guitar solo is impressive.

not a fan of this music genre at all but i think it sounds a bit too harsch/unplugged.

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:40 pm

thanks for the input... i so suck at trying to master songs.... ugh... i'll do some work on the vox and repost...thanks again guys...

ubw rookie Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 147

Try to compare it to another song you want it to sound like and play them back on the same system and get them as close sounding as possible. -rl

Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:58 am

k will do! thx

Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 5:02 am

Loved the guitar solo and the finish was decent but I agree with some of the comments about the vocal being too prominent in the mix

ubw rookie Joined: May 13, 2008 Posts: 78

YES LIKE THE VOCALS MOODY LITTLE NUMBER

ubw newbie Joined: Jul 19, 2009 Location: London Posts: 24

It's okay. not my genre or sound. There are some tuning issues between the main vocal and the backing vocal. There are also instrument timing issues but I know this is a low budget recording. Keep working on it it could be something!!!!

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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:44 pm

thanks for the input guys... it really helps!

ubw newbie Joined: Oct 29, 2009 Posts: 5

Where are the drums? Needs more than just the hi-hat all the time, it got repetitive and kind of annoying. I can hear a little more in the background on some parts but it needs more in the beginning. Maybe it's just the mixing but I think it could use a little more complexity.

The lead guitar has a good part but seems to come out of nowhere. I'd try to add a riff or two, simple ones, to the early part of the song when there is only strumming to create a better lead-in to the solo part so that it's not quite so jarring.

Not a bad effort at all. I think the song itself - chord progression, lyrics, etc., is promising but it needs a lot of polishing.

if you love me- new overdue song...lemme know what ya think

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