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ubw newbie Joined: Sep 13, 2009 Posts: 16

Well this is the song I just made yesterday
I dont have the equipment so i'm just working with what i have
Please tell me what do I need to do to improve in gutar voals and stuff

My band is Called The Silent

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/13676/

Its called Spoken Dreams Very Happy

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:18 am

Very nice, gloomy sort of song. I really like the guitar, I think you need a different effect on it though. The vocal effect is really cool... It's great. Wink

Want to collaborate sometime? Anyway, I'm posting your song on Relentless Love's facebook. Hopefully you will get some more listens.

ubw newbie Joined: Sep 13, 2009 Posts: 16

Wow thanks alot, yeah i would to calaborate Very Happy

Yea Ima redo the song. I did the song in drop c tuning
ima do it in standard now Smile

Thank you so freakin much for putting me on facebook

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:30 am

Haha I always accidentally tune down a half step.... I think the joker guitar is even lower Shocked

Your welcome! We don't have fans yet, but do you have purevolume? Oh and anything interesting/ideas you have for collab?

ubw newbie Joined: Sep 13, 2009 Posts: 16

I dont know, do you have any ideas, and how many people are in your band

Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:42 am

Only 2 people! Smile

I have some lyrics, tell me what you think:

Slowly and

Silently

Slipping forward,

on your knees,

crawling,

trying,

not to scream,

as you see what's become of me.

I'm not a liar,

I'm just too cynical for most,

I ain't no lawyer,

theonly person I defend is myself.

Don't ever ever

don't ever ever,

let them take,

you alive.

And,

Don't never never,

don't never never,

try to hide,

because you'll be the one they find.

Falling thorugh time, falling through space,

almost the same pace.

As before,

the world adored,

how you would run.

I'm not a tax collector,

I just love to steal.

I'm not a murderer,

that's just how it feels.

I just found this, I wrote it a few years ago.

ubw newbie Joined: Sep 13, 2009 Posts: 16

Thats kickass. Is it about the goverment Smile

What bands and genres you into. so what instrument you play

Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:37 am

Yeah it's kind of about the government... Razz

I play guitar, sing, and some piano

ubw newbie Joined: Sep 13, 2009 Posts: 16

What bands and generes you into

ubw newbie Joined: Jul 19, 2009 Location: London Posts: 25

I wish I could review this as a song but it's far from that. Don't like the rain effect and the song goes nowhere. Doom and gloom is all. Maybe just not y type of thing and perhaps I'm too mainstream for this kind of thing. Sounds like a even more depressive type of grunge.

ubw newbie Joined: Sep 13, 2009 Posts: 16

Thanks for the honesty. I know, it just ends quickly.
I just gotta take off the rain becuz it just takes to much space.

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