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relentlesskiki
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Location: New York
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| Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:44 pm |
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Link in signature. Would really appreciate any comments, suggestions. This is a rough recording so bear with me, the idea is what I want reviewed really. |
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relentlesskiki
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| Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:45 pm |
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smili
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| Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:16 pm |
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I really like the characteristics of the vocal performance.
It's tough to say anything else about the song itself due to minimalist and recording. guitar part was pretty iffy. |
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PPB
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| Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:20 am |
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Sweet song, the singer have a little something of Tori Amos if you know this female artist.
The song is short but it's enough to make a pleasant song, i liked it, the song is very pure some ways.
You just have to devellop it more to make it greater.
I like the way the song finish on an accent.
Cheers keep on making this beautiful music  |
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relentlesskiki
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Location: New York
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| Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 2:30 pm |
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Thanks for the comments!  Yeah the guitar was crap, I know. I'm gonna re-do it later tonight I think... |
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TheSilentGuitarist
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| Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:08 am |
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Its absolutely Kickass
Just the guitar..But still kickass |
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TheSilentGuitarist
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| Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:09 am |
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Its absolutely Kickass
Just the guitar..But still kickass |
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