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Doubles
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| Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:49 am |
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quality isnt what im looking for i was wondering if anyone thinks i should mainstream this song...
here's the link for song and lyrics for it as well
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64892961dbcbc755/
Lyrics-
Verse-1
i let em all hate, they can make mistakes, in the end it comes down to whos in da better state, for the weak have fallen and the strong survived, they each give there all in even tho its along ride, patience is a key at dis moment in time, chasing for a dream altho it sneaks up from behind, catches u in awkward situations u dont see, he knows dat hes fought for it he needs to be free, what is freedom he uses affirmative action, will they need him or just see him as a burned up rapper, no more games left with pain a life before and after, no more shame just an aim to close the door in this chapter, its a contest with a main event advantage ,will you conquer da game and be the last man standing? they all wonder what will become of this person, continues to keep running from life dat has hurt em,
Verse-2
as he stands up strong he's the victor of the scene, can he walk away turn his back still come out clean, he's hiding away from all of the money and all the fame, hes always striving to be da highest in da game, they have tried to lie and belittle him through it all, but he'll never stop the fight he's ready for brawl, there will be no submissions no chances to give up, he gets visions of trances its the life they given us, triggers the emotions he keeps down deep inside, forbidden to close doors when his dreams are still alive, he cant wait any longer his life has been scorned, he'll still stand up stronger forever through the storm, conclusions drawn theres no chance of fate, an illlusion of the mind dawned and now i just cant wait, ur stuck a pawn never win this game, so many have clawed and were torn wit shame
Verse-3
stay outta this business in actuality its forbiddin, to replans your tactics cause it goes to a decision, now how is it a man in prison isnt givin the privledge of livin, admittin his vicious mission is to drop bombs dat are still tickin, he's risen theres no latter day saints here, a trigger finger badly battered and left in tears, as he battles back constantly pressed wit fears, his shadow follows behind the ones he loved so dear, da top has been reached and im still gonna climb, never drop to the bottom cause da game is always mine, cuz he's a wolf never look into his eyes, with his sheeps clothing he's the master of disguise, if its really impossible then you'll be next, its unstoppable ha when it comes to THE END, haha or maybe its the beginning, a mind gone crazy over the life he's been livin,
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Is it left like that always and forever, to be constantly pressed to always do better, what do they expect the next steps to be, respect da game never let it get the best of me, some have tried all have failed, a story of a mans pride as its locked up in hell, and da demons aint even releasing there hold, ill give meaning to a beast inside of this soul, |
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lodato
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| Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:39 am |
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The link wouldn't open for me. But your lyrics are passionate, musical, meaningful and insightful. Very nice writting. -rl
P.S.... You really should upload the song on this site. You'll get more listeners and maybe some important feedback. It also sounds much better. |
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Doubles
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| Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:48 pm |
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lodato
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| Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:50 pm |
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Very nice piece. I enjoyed that a lot. You are a talented guy and it shows in spades in this very good work. Thanks for sharing. Love the refrain and all the background voices. The sound of the vocals is top notch audio wise sweet, sweet top end as well as performance. -rl |
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Doubles
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| Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:09 am |
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thanks i really appreciate it do you think it has a chance to make it on the radio? |
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lodato
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| Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:35 am |
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If it were up to me yes. But as you know, getting radio play is tough at best the odds are always against you unless you have an inside foot. |
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PPB
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| Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:13 pm |
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dead link man...
please repost an updated stream at least link for us  |
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Doubles
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| Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:23 pm |
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Doubles
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| Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 2:52 pm |
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i submited this to the tate music group for concideration as one of there artists im just lookin for some reviews on it lyrics is good i've gotten but i need to know how the delivery came out and if the beat is catchy plz get back to me listen to the beast at
www.myspace.com/doubzny |
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r1char
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| Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:51 pm |
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dude this is ill.
i could see this goin main
you make the beat? its off the hook. |
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