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phr33kzilla
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Joined: Dec 28, 2004
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| Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 3:13 pm |
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Hey guys,
Got a new song up by my band STONEBRUISE. The song is called FOCUS and we can't wait to hear constructive opinions from what we consider the most brutally honest forum out today.
Namiste
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gunner
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Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
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| Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:28 pm |
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lodato
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Joined: Sep 27, 2005
Posts: 147
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:44 am |
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Nice raw feeling to the song. I like the live feel on the recording. Vocals cut through nicely. It has commercial appeal as well would be good for a movie as it is visual. The ending is questionable but I think I like it. Some of my endings are questionable indeed! You sound a little like the band "Train". It's downloadable, but you don't have that option.. -rl |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
Posts: 567
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| Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:11 pm |
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gunner killed me... 
nice song and deeply incrusted vocals , nothing to say on flaw for recording.
Your cymbal sound bit harsh not spaced enought.
Maybe you want to keep it "pure" but a bassboost will make it more sellable (a light one)
Recording and builds are good just bring the mastering touch studio pro 
very good inspiration and singer here !  |
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phr33kzilla
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Joined: Dec 28, 2004
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| Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 12:52 am |
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Guys... Heartfelt thanks for the review. And a special "You're Awesome !" to Gunner for helping with my lack of mental prowess! |
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OutcastRadio
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Joined: Aug 13, 2009
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| Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 6:03 pm |
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A seriously good song! Stuck in my head for a while. Easily the best song I've heard by an unsigned band this year. Which is why we want to play thi song on Outcast Radio.
Email me Outcastradio@mail.com if you want us to play your song to 5000+ listeners for free. |
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KingRobot
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Joined: Jul 19, 2009
Location: London
Posts: 25
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| Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:19 pm |
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Yeh a good song better than most the trash I hear on here. Well done. Really like the ending and the whole feel of the track. Good vocals and lyrics I'm well impressed. Keep up the work.
Liked Kilter too reminds me of early Nirvana and Red hot Chilli Peppers but obviously your own twist. Obvious talent and emotion. |
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TheSilentGuitarist
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Joined: Sep 13, 2009
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| Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:47 pm |
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I think the song is kickass. Reall would see it in the media.
I love this song. 5/5 Kewl |
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