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DustinSea
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:09 pm Reply with quote

these are the lyrics i wrote for a song named EFFERVESCENT by Kevin, our guitarist, for our band AS TIDES TURN (soon to be name changed)
what ja think?

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with legacies now gutted the mourners mask their apathy, mirroring apostasy
save your stigma for my newly arisen priapism, sexy mortuism
suspended over horrors hardening
asphyxiated terra terrors
wake me up when we reach the sea
riptides to rip you apart, waves crash against your inner thighs
send my regards to neptune, another lipless dame punging into the deep
the maelstroms vast an surely mighty, merely my gloryholes
from these gory ocean hoes
another lifeless frame, that beauty once knew by name
now for this fate to feign
leviathin
wear these bitches bones thin.
she went to waterbed funeral dressed
i slid the finishing touches around her neck
and columbian tied it.
the hagfish would have kissed away those pursing lips if you
had any left, if you wouldve had any left anymore
i stole you from the shore.
i took you to where the ocean touches the sky
i buried you where the ocean touches the sky.
now you must find your way back to
find your way back to him now
now you must find your way to
back to
neptune
you knew id get you wet, be it with your own severed head
or my one hand grasping your neck
you knew id get you wet, before miss your eloquence met its end, bloody.
the horizin draws a vile line,
[/align] we'll cross it by tonight
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DustinSea
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:53 pm Reply with quote

no one eh? haha
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:38 pm Reply with quote

A suicide for the lose of a lover. A friend picking up the pieces. I think it's a bit abstract and leaves it open to all kinds of interpretation. This is waht I get from it. I like it and it's quite challenging as poetry. Wordy to a point that will leave some people in the dark for it's meaning... Maybe me too and I consider myself a poet. I do like the way it makes you want to read till the end. -rl
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