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Esoterica
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| Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:44 pm |
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PPB
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| Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:04 pm |
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great musician skill, this need more mastering/clean signal on prod.
the compo is just amazing, my favorite instrument in your compo is the groovy horn...
you back on studio stage for this one please  |
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Esoterica
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| Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:21 am |
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I did some more touch up work. I think the highs are balanced much better now. Plus, I dropped the amp release on the percussion so there's less muck. |
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PPB
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| Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 11:27 pm |
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From the first record i can say this is really better, this doesn't sound harsch anymore.
It's more musical now
Bit too fast outro however.This to add a soft snare with echoe at the end ?
You music make me think to midnight city lights  |
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gunner
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| Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:40 pm |
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I have but just one complaint, you need some changes, other than that, very clean recording, i really like the way it flows and the way it feels, just need a few changes in there to mix it up, reminds of a Scion car commercial, thats a not a bad thing is it??..lol...you should submit it!!
but a real good groove, I like it!! |
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nwgsk
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| Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:29 pm |
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Jazz/Blues? New Age, definitely much more! It's got a jazzy feel, but viewing it through the arrangement, it sounds more like electronica. Namely, the drums are excellent, the bass is excellent. If there was a little more of various melodies, I'd call it a great one. And this way, a very good one "only".
Also, there are three new internet radio stations launched these days within a music promotion software called "Sombrero MPG". I find your music good enough to be a part of it. If interested in it, see more details on Sombrero MPG Music Promotion , download the free software from this link to your computer and run the "SombreroMPG_Setup.exe". You'll see, it's very cool. I'd be glad to see you there! |
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lodato
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| Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 8:43 pm |
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Nice. The ending doesn't match the feel of the piece which is not abrupt at all as the ending is. I was thinking that you didn't know what to do with it. I like PPBs idea of an echo/delay at the end of that note. Or add another ambient noise on top of the end note that fades. But again, I like the feeling of this piece. -rl |
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Esoterica
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| Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:18 pm |
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| nwgsk wrote: | Jazz/Blues? New Age, definitely much more! It's got a jazzy feel, but viewing it through the arrangement, it sounds more like electronica. Namely, the drums are excellent, the bass is excellent. If there was a little more of various melodies, I'd call it a great one. And this way, a very good one "only".
Also, there are three new internet radio stations launched these days within a music promotion software called "Sombrero MPG". I find your music good enough to be a part of it. If interested in it, see more details on Sombrero MPG Music Promotion , download the free software from this link to your computer and run the "SombreroMPG_Setup.exe". You'll see, it's very cool. I'd be glad to see you there! |
Thanks nwgsk for the link, but sadly neither of my computers are running windows atm. I'll think about installing it; though it really frustrates me. No intuitive flow to the os in my opinion. |
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