more free music than you know what to do with...

The Flood

 Music Forums Song Reviews The Flood  
Post new topicReply to topic Message
Esoterica
ubw newbie
ubw newbie



Joined: Jul 20, 2009

Posts: 9

Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:44 pm Reply with quote

If you feel so inclined to review this song, please do so irregardless of my feelings; I really appreciate honest criticism. Other than that, think jazz/blues. Thanks in advance for any and all reviews! Very Happy

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?mode=song_hifi&band_id=13356&song_id=30832
Back to top View user's profileSend e-mail
PPB
moderator



Joined: Jun 30, 2007

Posts: 565

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:04 pm Reply with quote

great musician skill, this need more mastering/clean signal on prod.
the compo is just amazing, my favorite instrument in your compo is the groovy horn...

you back on studio stage for this one please Very Happy
Back to top View user's profile
Esoterica
ubw newbie
ubw newbie



Joined: Jul 20, 2009

Posts: 9

Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:21 am Reply with quote

I did some more touch up work. I think the highs are balanced much better now. Plus, I dropped the amp release on the percussion so there's less muck.
Back to top View user's profileSend e-mail
PPB
moderator



Joined: Jun 30, 2007

Posts: 565

Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 11:27 pm Reply with quote

From the first record i can say this is really better, this doesn't sound harsch anymore.

It's more musical now Smile

Bit too fast outro however.This to add a soft snare with echoe at the end ?

You music make me think to midnight city lights Smile
Back to top View user's profile
gunner
ubw luminary
ubw luminary



Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
Posts: 772

Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:40 pm Reply with quote

I have but just one complaint, you need some changes, other than that, very clean recording, i really like the way it flows and the way it feels, just need a few changes in there to mix it up, reminds of a Scion car commercial, thats a not a bad thing is it??..lol...you should submit it!!
but a real good groove, I like it!!
Back to top View user's profile
nwgsk
ubw newbie
ubw newbie



Joined: Jul 28, 2009

Posts: 7

Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:29 pm Reply with quote

Jazz/Blues? New Age, definitely much more! It's got a jazzy feel, but viewing it through the arrangement, it sounds more like electronica. Namely, the drums are excellent, the bass is excellent. If there was a little more of various melodies, I'd call it a great one. And this way, a very good one "only". Smile
Also, there are three new internet radio stations launched these days within a music promotion software called "Sombrero MPG". I find your music good enough to be a part of it. If interested in it, see more details on Sombrero MPG Music Promotion , download the free software from this link to your computer and run the "SombreroMPG_Setup.exe". You'll see, it's very cool. I'd be glad to see you there!
Back to top View user's profile
lodato
ubw rookie
ubw rookie



Joined: Sep 27, 2005

Posts: 144

Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 8:43 pm Reply with quote

Nice. The ending doesn't match the feel of the piece which is not abrupt at all as the ending is. I was thinking that you didn't know what to do with it. I like PPBs idea of an echo/delay at the end of that note. Or add another ambient noise on top of the end note that fades. But again, I like the feeling of this piece. -rl
Back to top View user's profile
Esoterica
ubw newbie
ubw newbie



Joined: Jul 20, 2009

Posts: 9

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:18 pm Reply with quote

nwgsk wrote:
Jazz/Blues? New Age, definitely much more! It's got a jazzy feel, but viewing it through the arrangement, it sounds more like electronica. Namely, the drums are excellent, the bass is excellent. If there was a little more of various melodies, I'd call it a great one. And this way, a very good one "only". Smile
Also, there are three new internet radio stations launched these days within a music promotion software called "Sombrero MPG". I find your music good enough to be a part of it. If interested in it, see more details on Sombrero MPG Music Promotion , download the free software from this link to your computer and run the "SombreroMPG_Setup.exe". You'll see, it's very cool. I'd be glad to see you there!


Thanks nwgsk for the link, but sadly neither of my computers are running windows atm. I'll think about installing it; though it really frustrates me. No intuitive flow to the os in my opinion.
Back to top View user's profileSend e-mail
Post new topic Reply to topic