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Marino
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Joined: Jul 09, 2009
Location: Usa
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| Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:16 am |
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I have a little something I put together a few months ago for one of my music projects(The marino experiment)This piece is call Sunset and its mostly a mix between electronica and slight funk feel but somehow it has a sort of world (genre) element to it..
Please share your thoughts Im always open to suggestions and feedback..
Heres the link
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?mode=song_hifi&band_id=13323&song_id=30564
Thanks for listening..
Anyway anyone needing a review feel free to message me..
Marino |
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smili
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Joined: Sep 11, 2004
Location: Nashville TN
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| Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 6:22 pm |
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Marino, Love the way it starts. Reminds me of the cantina in the first Star Wars movie. Sounds really good on my computer speakers.
Nice job on the sax solo part about 1:30 or so.
I thought about 2:23 it was going to crank back up, but it went even more quiet, then comes back in a few beats later. nice.
Have you seen the TV show "Burn Notice?" The song has has the attitude and vibe of that show - kindof like they're setting up their sting and this is the music that plays when it all goes down.
really good stuff. |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
Posts: 567
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| Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:13 am |
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start on verse with no intro only real problem for the track,
look cool n rich of sphere, string is very cool, bass is bit too slow lenght...the horn rise now...very good...
this bring electro dreams to me and i made a lot...excellent music ! just try a better bass...outro is not amazing too.
i'm glad i listened this electronica piece it have some positive emotions to me inside.
cheers !!! |
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Esoterica
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Joined: Jul 20, 2009
Posts: 9
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| Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:28 pm |
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Good stuff, good stuff. Sounds excellent. Your melody is nice, but I think you may see improvements if you utilized harmony more. Otherwise, I like it; it's welcome in my music library for sure! |
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replicaprada
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Joined: Jul 28, 2009
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| Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 12:18 am |
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Thanks for your sharingThanks for sharing this useful information. It's great.
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lodato
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Joined: Sep 27, 2005
Posts: 147
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| Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:01 am |
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I just had a listen and I like the music a lot. The synthy guitars are just right and blend and weave through the tune nicely and glue the track together. I do agree however with PPB on the bass which is good in theory but lacks attention in execution. It just needs more presense. Other than that it's a nice ride. -rl |
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nwgsk
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Joined: Jul 28, 2009
Posts: 7
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| Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:03 pm |
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You've made it very carefully, I can see that. Every sound is in its place, the stereo is an excellent one. The same goes for the sound's purity and the quality of the bass. A really nice piece of electronica. Even the melody is a recognizable one, which is rare for tracks of this genre.
It's got the look, so I'd be glad to call you to join the "Nightflight" internet radio station that was launched a few days ago. Such electronic tracks, like this one is, are very welcome to be heard on this radio. See more details on Sombrero MPG Flash Movie . |
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