JavierVasquez
ubw newbie
Joined: May 08, 2009
Location: Dietroit
Posts: 5
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| Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 1:15 am |
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Although the artist posted that he would like only the lyrics paid attention to; perhaps he was being modest.
With a stronger voice and a few musical alterations, the formatting of this song could make it a hit. I don't really hear the 'everyone will sing along with' hook but---the melody of it has promise.
If the (intentional?) darkness was removed from the delivery of the lyrics and music, this could be a pop hit for sure. (Even if you left the fuzz in there; which is a plus).
In all, I'd give it a 3 out of 5! |
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