In Your Eyes

Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 3:05 am

This is an earlier track of mine that a few have really liked. Would love to hear some reviews.

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/play.php?mode=song_hifi&band_id=13018&song_id=29973

ubw newbie Joined: Apr 21, 2009 Posts: 1

I was listening around this review section and after I listened to this, I decided to make an account just now and review it. Smile

I think this song has great potential, as in, if it were done completely, with effects, neater recording, maybe even drums and bass. Im assuming that this is just a simple/quick take of this song.

Some small parts stuck out, or came off as slightly embeloushed... Specificaly, the vocals from :55 - 1:01 a few other little instances... But still, I think that this song could be worth perfecting Wink

This reminds me of some of the grunge stuff I've always liked. I hope to hear more Smile

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 567

unppluged at the max...too dry signal...nice lyrics and convinced singer...balanced compo...chorus is fine...hook "in your eyes" is my favortes second on the song...very accoustic for headphone listener i think. Very Happy

ubw rookie Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 147

Hey there, you have been very busy here lately. Nice to have you around. Now as for this song. I like the song. It has a nice melody and interesting lyrics but the vocals are all over the place. This is very low-fi and that's fine but that only is cool for a while then it gets old. The harmony would work but it needs to be corrected in a big way. I'd love to here this song recorded better. It's worth the effort and you have the talent to pull it off.

In Your Eyes

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