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New acoustic track, "Lined In Silver" by JMJ

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Maisie
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 1:45 pm Reply with quote
I've just uploaded one of my few ballads, "Lined In Silver." Please give it a listen and tell me what you think about it! Unfortunately, to upload this track I had to remove "As Bright As You" and Careening," due to my minimal 15mb of space, due to my lack of an income as a struggling college student. In any case, let me know what you think.

One of my few softer, more sentimental songs, "Lined In Silver" tells the story of a lonely boy who heads off to war and returns to discover he's been forgotten.

Thanks!
Jack Maisie, Jr.
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Brooksy
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 10:12 am Reply with quote
Classy as usual there, pal.
Some really good strong lyrics in there.
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minusme
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Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 5:27 pm Reply with quote
Maisie...

Listening now.

I like the open ended chords you use through the verse. I've written songs using similar structure.. Really well done.

Excellent as usual!!!!

Ron
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